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| 18's Guide to Better Writing; From new writers to 'experienced' ones! | |
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| Topic Started: Mar 21 2009, 06:15 PM (602 Views) | |
| Katamaont | Mar 21 2009, 06:15 PM Post #1 |
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I quite enjoy writing. I don't consider myself the best writer out there, but casting aside all the tethers of humility I can definitely say I know my way around the field of literature. I wrote this a while ago because I was a little tired of fanfiction writers making the same mistakes over and over and over again, and it's interesting because even those with a good grasp of the English language still make similar mistakes in plot and character. This is a pretty short guide, just a collection of brief tips on how to make your writing more fluid, more original, more exciting, and more effective overall. Spoiler: click to toggle Also, while I don't have many recent examples of short stories I've written, there is one that's purposefully short on characterization and immersion but still exemplifies the style I hawk in that little guide. I'll post it here, in case anyone either wants to see some of the stuff in action, or else wants to sneer at the guide because they think I'm a crappy writer .Spoiler: click to toggle
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| Sir Kitm | Mar 22 2009, 06:07 PM Post #2 |
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That was a pretty good guide! Maybe now I can get some enthusiasm back into my writing! And, on a side note, that was an impressive piece of literature. |
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| Katamaont | Mar 22 2009, 07:53 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you find it useful! |
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| Devona | Mar 23 2009, 08:51 AM Post #4 |
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Flying Battery Act 2
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I don't know how I can thank you enough! My English teacher is wanting us to write a " Good" short story, and he wants it to be so good, that it publishes. I don't know what I would've done without this! Thank You! |
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| Katamaont | Mar 23 2009, 08:28 PM Post #5 |
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Hahah, wow, that's fantastic, mate! You'll have to tell me where I can get my hands on this story of yours; you sound like you've got some real talent. You're very welcome, and congratulations!
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| `TakeCare | Mar 24 2009, 06:25 AM Post #6 |
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Pokemon Battle?
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Do you think you can copy it into spoiler tags? My network always takes too long to upload Freewebs. |
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| Katamaont | Mar 24 2009, 02:25 PM Post #7 |
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Sure. I probably should have done that in the first place, actually; bolded headings aren't that important, and neither are italicized titles. That good, Lakitu?
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| Devona | Mar 25 2009, 01:01 PM Post #8 |
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Flying Battery Act 2
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I have finally finished the short story, 7 pages on word. Well, I want to thank you again for these tips, they really help! |
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| Katamaont | Mar 26 2009, 12:55 AM Post #9 |
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You're quite welcome. Just remember to share with me sometime! |
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| Devona | Mar 26 2009, 12:03 PM Post #10 |
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Oh, I already posted it on here. I'm thinking of changing the main character's name, though. I am trying to use some symbolism and I can't decide if the main character's name should be Fate of Faith. The story is posted under " Faith" so please look at it and tell me what you think. Thanks again! |
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| Katamaont | Mar 26 2009, 12:16 PM Post #11 |
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Fantastic. I'll be sure to let you know what I think! |
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| `TakeCare | Mar 28 2009, 05:48 PM Post #12 |
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Ah, where are my manner? Thanks. This helps quite a bit. |
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| RidersDX | Mar 29 2009, 12:35 PM Post #13 |
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I sure wish I read this before I wrote anything on this site. This is really helpful. Thanks. |
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| Myst | Apr 3 2009, 06:42 PM Post #14 |
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Nice guide! I'll try to keep your tips in mind when I type. |
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| wowzaa1 | Apr 30 2009, 05:31 PM Post #15 |
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You are never quite the person you think you are
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That is a G-R-E-A-T story. Seriously its cool. Anyways can you give an example of foreshadowing i'm not completely sure how to do it. |
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| Katamaont | May 16 2009, 06:21 PM Post #16 |
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Well, one fairly good (not perfect, but still good) example would be in Erin Hunter's Warriors series. The series starts with a prophecy (a cliché, but at least it's done well enough) that "fire will save the Clan". A chapter later, the protagonist is introduced, who is a reddish cat, and a few chapters after that he's named and is told with significance that in the light he looks like a spark of flame. Like I said, not perfect, as it's pretty obvious, but then again so is the significance of the protagonist in a fantasy series (they're all heroes). It's also not so obvious as to identify the main antagonist, the problem at hand, or the trials to come; it simply tells the reader that this is the guy they're watching, and there's gonna be some pretty cool stuff happening as the series progresses surrounding him...building the suspense, which is the whole point of foreshadowing. That help? |
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| Joso | May 26 2009, 02:52 AM Post #17 |
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thank you so much for the guide , and i will make sure to use it to write a good story in my exam btw the description you wrote in the example was too! long and i get somewhat confused and thanks again
Edited by Joso, May 26 2009, 02:56 AM.
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| Beta_Ray_Banhammer | May 31 2009, 12:01 PM Post #18 |
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This is a wonderful guide, it's sure to help me immensely. Also, that was a rather amazing story, the ending made my jaw drop as I realized what was going on. |
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Angel Island Act 1
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I have a good imagination when it comes to writing, but my handwriting is... bunch o' scribbles XP |
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thank you so much for the guide , and i will make sure to use it to write a good story in my exam 






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