~Welcome to the Sonic Blast Community Forum~
Greetings stranger, it is an honor to have you as a visitor. Since we opened in 2006 our goal has been to offer the most authentic Sonic-themed community on the web for Sonic enthusiasts new and old. We do our best to provide the most unique features, best Sonic-themed designs, and have the latest news; always improving to cover all of your Sonic needs. Our community is full of friendly people and we hope you enjoy your brief stay but would be thrilled if you decided to join in on the fun. Being a part of our community is easy, quick, and absolutely free.

Click here to join our community and enter the land of Mobius as a =SB= citizen!
Citizens may log in to their account to participate in our land's conversations and access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
Sonic Fancharacters; All my chararacters
Topic Started: Jan 24 2009, 06:03 PM (603 Views)
HollyYoshiPosted Image
Member Avatar
I object to your claims
Alright, I've got a fancharcter ready for reviewing. Please note that this is the thread I will post subsequent fan characters on. Also note that this template is not mine. Credit goes to Concept Mobius/Technoguild. Now that that's done with, I present my fancharacter! Review all you want, but no flames please. Hahaha! (Oh, and sorry if the backstory seems a little on the cliche side.)



== I. Basic Information ==

Full Name: Blaire Fields

Alias: None

Gender: Female

Species: Siberian Husky

Alignment: Hero

Place of Origin: Oakland Village- an secluded village near Hilltop Zone

Place of Residence: Oakland Village

Occupation: Oakland Force Agent (The Oakland Force Union(OFU) is a well-structured underground Freedom Fighter-esque organization. Basically, they take reconnaissance missions during times of crisis.)

Team: Blaire is a member of Team K-87. This team also consists of Drake McStrype, Aurora Lunetane, and Chester Chipton

Team Rank: Leader

Socioeconomic Status: Middle-class

== II. Physical Information==

Height: 4 feet (121.920 centimeters)

Weight: 85 pounds (38.555 kilograms)

Current Age: 19

Birth Date: March 14

Physical Appearance:
-Close-lying, soft purple fur
-Long-snouted, lavender-furred fuzzy muzzle
-Lavender-furred inner ears
-Thin purple-furred legs
-Purple-furred hands
-Purple-furred feet
-Lavender-furred abdomen
-Large, almost-always lidded eyes with blue irises, black pupils, and glassy white sclera
-Purple eyelids with two short eyelashes on either side
-Long, triangular, erect purple-furred ears that are continuously alert
-Shiny round, black nose with no apparent nostrils
-Long, arched purple-furred tail with a lavender underside
-Thin purple-furred arms

Body Structure: Blaire is a fit individual. She has a slender body, and is taller than most Siberian Huskies, which run about 3.8 feet on average. She has great strength in her arms, a direct result of training with her prized Sapphire Blade. Her legs are also quite strong, allowing her great reflexes, helpful in dodging attacks from foes. These reflexes help compensate (sp?) with Blaire’s low defense-she can take several minor jolts, but it only takes a few major blows for her to go down for the count.

Attire:
-A dark red sleeveless shirt with a magenta collar
-An open, dark blue trench coat that extends a few inches past her shirt.
-A pair of navy blue jeans
-A pair of red gloves with thick, darker red cuffs
-A pair of dark purple boots with black trim around the soles
-When riding Extreme Gear, her trench coat is replaced by a sky blue, button-down vest, with her regular red shirt underneath. She also wears a pair of dark blue pants with red stripes running down the outside of the legs, and white boots with purple straps.
-Sometimes dons a pair of blue-rimmed sunglasses with black lens

Gear and Accessories:
- Night Vision Goggles-A pair of red goggles with orange lens
-A small cell phone-like communicator, used to get in touch with her team mates

Vehicles:
-Ice Husky-An ice blue and purple Extreme Gear Board. The Ice Husky has a high top speed and average power, but poor cornering. It doubles as a snowboard for those wintery days.


== III. Mental Information ==

Intelligence: Blaire has an IQ of around 125. She is quite knowledgeable regarding the different Mobian Forces, and can easily grasp explanations pretty easily. This young Husky is also a quick thinker, and has a well-rounded amount of common sense.

Personality: Blaire is a cool-headed Siberian Husky, calm and collected in the face
of danger. This personality trait most likely streams from the dog’s habit of relaxing under a shady tree near a serene stream. However, she is not at all oblivious to the dangers of her job as an Oakland Force agent. For this reason, it is safe to say her calm nature is there mostly to help her handle stressful situations. Blaire is also quite spunky, and a bit of a tomboy.
Blaire breaks the normal Siberian Husky characteristic of favoring to work in a team in that this canine prefers solo missions. This desire is a bit strange, as Blaire is by no means a solitary Mobian, and in reality is quite social. However, she is not against working in a team, provided that she is placed with Mobians she can work with, something that has happened many times with her Force team, luckily.

Theme Song: N/A

Hobbies and Interests: Honing her sword-fighting skills, tennis, snowboarding, and listening to music.

Likes: Tennis, relaxing, soft music, winter, snowboarding, chatting with her friends, and solo missions.

- Gourmet of Choice: Chocolate Mints
-Beverage of Choice: Grape Juice
-Favorite Color: Brick Red

Dislikes: Loud music, hot weather, soccer, show-offs, and oppression.
-Least Favorite Food: Spaghetti
-Least Favorite Drink: Tea
Least Favorite Color: Pink


== IV. Combat Ability ==

Physical Advantages:
-Highly skilled Swordsmanship: Blaire uses various slashing tactics to defeat her opponent, her favorite method involving her forming a vertical semi-circle with the cutting edge. She slowly moves the blade in a curved motion, and then quickly shifts it upward. This almost always ends with the sword in an upright position, giving Blaire some protection if her foe strikes back.
-Excellent Reflexes: Because of Blaire’s low defense, she needs to avoid getting hit by strong attacks. This is where her great response time comes in. If she spots her foe coming after her, she can leap or sidestep out of the way, so as to avoid the attack.
-Resistance to the cold: Since she’s a Siberian Husky, it’s not surprising that Blaire can take a little chilly weather. This canine can handle temperatures as low as -50 degrees Celsius (-58 degrees Fahrenheit) without complaints.
Mental Advantages (in combat):
-Cool headedness: She is calm in the face of danger, and will not back down until either she or her opponent is defeated. Of course, she had strong moral values and fights to disable her opponent, not to kill them.
Physical Disadvantages:
-Low Defense: Blaire can’t take very much damage from strong blows. Whereas she can take a number of minor strikes, all her opponent has to do to defeat her is land a few hard blows, and Blaire will be out of the fight.
-Intolerant to high temperatures: As a husky, Blaire does not do well in places where the temperature is 90 degrees or higher. In these conditions, her fighting abilities tend to weaken, making it easier for her to be defeated in combat.
Mental Disadvantages (in combat):
-Her determination is as much a disadvantage as it is an advantage. This is because once she gets in a battle, she will not back out, even if defeat is certain.

Weaponry:
-Sapphire Blade-A metallic blue saber with a dark hilt. The Sapphire Blade was given to her after she completed her sword-fighting training.
Abilities:
-Slicing Twister: With her sword outstretched, Blaire spins a few times in a circle, harming any foes within range.
-Uppercut Slash: Blaire leaps into the air with her blade above her head, and slashes her opponent. Good for aerial foes.
-Tail Whip: Blaire turns on her heels, lashing out with her tail.
-Crescent Slash: Holding the tip of her saber out in front, Blaire slowly moves it in a vertical arc. Next, she swiftly shifts the blade upward. This ends with the blade in an upright position, making it a guard against attacks. The husky’s finishing move.



== V. History==

Family:
-Rachael Fields: (Mother, 43)
-Alexander Fields: (Father, 44)

Friends:
-Aurora Lunetane: (Wolf, 19)
-Chester Chipton: (Chipmunk, 18)
-Drake McStrype: (Tiger, 20)

Enemies:
-Raxton Klawzax: (Cougar, 23)
-Scarlett Cyphon: (Fox, 21)

Rivals:
-Scarlett Cyphon (as far as Swordsmanship is concerned)

Background Story:

-Age 0-4

Born in the peaceful town of Oakland Village, Blaire’s early years on the planet were as normal as you could get. Her mother, Rachael was a respected artist, and would often sell her best paintings for a few thousand dollars or more so. Alexander, her father, worked for the Oakland Police Department.

Shortly after the husky puppy’s third birthday, her parents took her to the local park. A family of wolves had arrived shortly before the Fields- the Lunetanes. It was there that Blaire met her best friend and most trusted confidant, their oldest daughter Aurora. The Siberian Husky had been playing in those large tubes playgrounds often have, when she noticed the shadow of a small wolf pup outside the mouth. Overcome with curiosity, the young dog crawled out to see this new creature. Hellos were exchanged, and after an hour or so of playtime, Blaire and Aurora became fast friends, and remain so to this very day.

-Age 4-9

Not long after, a family of Chipmunks moved into the quaint Oakland Village. Among them was their hyperactive son, Chester Chipton. While strolling through the woods right by her house one day, the sound of tree limbs rustling caught her ears. Looking up, the canine spotted an extremely vigorous Chipmunk leaping awkwardly from branch to branch. When Chester noticed Blaire standing below him, the small squirrel lost whatever concentration he had and tumbled to the ground. Blaire was surprised when the Chipmunk that hand landed in front of her leaped to his feet and began rambling on about how well he thought the whole ordeal went, not concerned about the fall he had taken. It took the calm Blaire a while to get used to Chester’s boundless energy, but once she had, she found the Chipmunk’s witty demeanor a great picker-upper when she was feeling down.

It was at the age of nine when the husky learned of the Oakland Force Union. Her father had been reading the morning paper when one particular article caught his eyes:

“OAKLAND FORCE ONE TO BE RECKONED WITH!”

As Alexander read the article to Rachael and Blaire, the later grew quite interested in this Oakland Force Union. Apparently, a group of Force Agents had completed what seemed like a highly difficult mission in the harsh Ice Cap Zone. Blaire wondered if the Oakland Force was anything like the Police Department where her father worked. In truth, like her mother said, it was relatively different. The OFU was more like the Mobian verision of GUN, but with a healthy dose of Freedom Fighter-ness. This caught Blaire’s curiosity, and she wanted to learn more about this specialized organization.

-Age 9-13

And so her education began. It started off with the young dog going through newspaper clippings of articles relating to the force. Gradually, as she gained more wisdom of the Oakland Force Union, Blaire soon had a desire to gain knowledge of as many similar unions as possible. But while she did spend quite a bit of time studying about the plant’s numerous coalitions, Blaire had always been a sociable Mobian. Therefore, her friends had never felt like she was alienating them. Drake McStype, a teenage tiger Chester had met recently, became especially interested in Blaire’s explanations of the force, and he soon became a good friend of the canine’s.

As the husky grew more and more knowledgeable about the OFU, she began to consider joining the Union herself, so she could help out in times of disaster.

-Age 13-16

Once the dog had made up her mind about becoming agent, she realized it would greatly benefit her if she learned some battle skills. Blaire had always preferred the grace and style of sword-fighting among other forms of combat. And luckily for her, there happened to be a training center specializing in the art of swordsmanship. Blaire wasted no time signing up for classes.

As the months went by, the canine became quite adept with a blade, much to the satisfaction of her teachers and the respect of most of her classmates. But of the colleagues that weren’t too ecstatic about how well Blaire was doing in class, only one Mobian openly expressed her jealously-Scarlett Cyphon. Scarlett, an arrogant fox a couple of years older than Blaire had been at the top of the class over a year running. But when she saw how the Siberian Husky became pretty skilled with a sword, Scarlett was more than a little irritated. And the resentment the fox felt for the dog only grew as both Mobians became more experienced.

Shortly before graduation, Blaire was working on a new move she had come up with-the Crescent Slash. While practicing this new maneuver, the Siberian Husky felt something sharp prick the back of her neck-Scarlett’s sword. The fox was just about to break the training center’s number one rule- “Do Not Kill Your Fellow Classmates”. Knowing that her life was at risk if she didn’t do something, Blaire had no choice but to swipe her blade at the Mobain behind her. This action forced Scarlett to back off a bit, giving Blaire time to turn around and verbally confronted the fox. However, Scarlett was not one to give up so easily on her original mission, and as a result, a pair of swords clashed.

When the dust settled, both combatants were left exhausted, and with small nicks and cuts on their bodies. Fortunately for Blaire, several Mobains had seen the whole ordeal, and the husky was off the hook. This did not hold true for Scarlett, as she was subsequently suspended from the training center.

Graduation came and Blaire Fields, now at the head of the class, was given the coveted Sapphire Blade. It has since become her main weapon.

-Age 16-19

When her schooling was complete, Blaire felt that she was ready to join the OFU. However, she would have to endure another year of training, this time for the union itself, if she was even to be considered for an agent. The canine agreed to these terms, and thus began one more year of training. Blaire’s hard work paid off, and when twelve months had passed, she along with three of her closest friends-Drake, Aurora, and Chester, were declared official agents. They were placed in team K-87.

The team’s first mission was supposed to be a relativity easy one-sneak into the lair of Raxton Klawzax, and find some computer chips that had stolen from a plant in Central City. Simple right?

Not quite.

While the assignment itself wasn’t too bad, what happened during the mission proved to be a little difficult. Blaire had been in the corridors of Raxton’s lair, trying to avoid detection from the villainous cougar’s guards. However, the husky was spotted-by a terribly familiar someone. Scarlett Cyphon. It turns out the fox was still irate about what happened at the training center over a year ago and joined Raxton’s force to get her revenge. She demanded a duel to settle everything. Blaire wouldn’t hear of it, but Scarlett made herself clear-Duel or Die. Realizing she had no choice, Blaire unsheathed her Sapphire Blade and soon it collided with Scarlett’s sword.

The swordfight raged on for what seemed like hours, with neither opponent backing down. Finally, Blaire managed to find a break in Scarlett’s defense. Using the Crescent Slash move she came up with, the husky swiped her Sapphire Blade at the traitorous fox. While Scarlett was momentarily distracted, Blaire swung the flat part of her saber at the treacherous Mobian, knocking her out cold.

With Scarlett defeated, Blaire could finish her original mission. But when the team located the computer chips, Raxton and several members of his soldiers appeared. Knowing they could not defeat every opponent in sight, Blaire’s team worked on escaping the lair. And they fortunately managed to do just that, making their assignment a success.

Since then, Blaire Fields has become a valuable member of the OFU, always ready to help in times of peril and jeopardy.


== VI. Concept Information==

Intended Role: My main fan character in the Sonic Universe.

Significant Meanings: Dogs have always been my favorite animal and having Blaire as my main character symbolizes this.

Incorporated Concepts: Sword-fighting. Blaire could also be incorporated with the concept of cool /cold weather-She’s a husky, she’s cool headed, is/wears primarily what artists would deem as “cool” colors (purple and blue), has an ice blue Extreme Gear/Snowboard, loves winter, ect. Wow, and I hadn’t even intended for the character to be themed around chilly climate like that.

Inspirations: Basic Siberian Husky attributes- Huskies are known for being sociable, highly intelligent, calm, independent, and working well in a team, something that Blaire embodies. (although this particular prefers solo missions) The sword-fighting concept was inspired by a couple of TV shows I watched that featured blades in a few episodes.

Trivia/Miscellaneous Information:

-Blaire has a huge obsession with chocolate mints, and always keeps a small pack with her at all times.

-Blaire’s first and last names sort of complement each other. It turns out the name “Blaire” means “Field”. When I found this out, the name “Blaire Fields” hit me *snaps fingers* just like that.

-This is the SEGASonic version of Blaire, but I’ve also created a version of her for the Sonic SatAM universe.


























Edited by HollyYoshi, May 9 2009, 08:49 AM.
Offline Mini Profile
 
The Storyteller
Member Avatar
No U
I like Blaire. She looks really well thought out. And I like how her weaknesses are realistic. I give her a 9/10, and i'll throw in the last point if you can get us a picture!
Check out my reviews!
Spoiler: click to toggle



"I'm in a hostile environment, I'm completely unprepared, and I'm surrounded by people who probably want to kick my ass. It's like being back in highschool!" ~ Lancun, Metroid Prime LP in the Phazon Mines.

Quotes by my Characters
Spoiler: click to toggle








Offline Mini Profile
 
HollyYoshiPosted Image
Member Avatar
I object to your claims
Thanks for the good review. I'm going to see if I can get a pic uploaded.

Posted Image
Offline Mini Profile
 
HollyYoshiPosted Image
Member Avatar
I object to your claims
It's been a long time coming, but I have a picture of Blaire. (I finally figured out how to load images) I've tried to mimic the SA-Style, but it didn't come out like I planned. I am happy with how the overall picture came out, though.

Posted Image
Offline Mini Profile
 
The Storyteller
Member Avatar
No U
I like the picture! She looks cool! (no husky pun intended)
Check out my reviews!
Spoiler: click to toggle



"I'm in a hostile environment, I'm completely unprepared, and I'm surrounded by people who probably want to kick my ass. It's like being back in highschool!" ~ Lancun, Metroid Prime LP in the Phazon Mines.

Quotes by my Characters
Spoiler: click to toggle








Offline Mini Profile
 
HollyYoshiPosted Image
Member Avatar
I object to your claims
Here it is, the Sat-AM version of Blaire Fields! Please note that I used a different template for this version. Credit for the template goes to Concept Mobius.

Name: Blaire Fields

Nicknames: None

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Species: Siberian Husky

Height: Four feet

Weight: 81 lbs

Date of Birth: March 14th, 3216

Hometown: Mobotropolis

Current Residence: Oakland Village-a hidden village near the Great Unknown

Occupation: Member of the Oakland Resistance Division

Alignment: Good

Basic Stats: (1 being the lowest, 10 the highest)
• Agility: 8
• Speed: 6
• Strength: 5.5
• Defense: 6
• Evasiveness: 8
• Intelligence: 7.5
• Skill: 8
Likes: Tennis, Freedom, Chocolate Mints, relaxing under a shady tree, listening to music, winter

Dislikes: Oppression, Robotization, being interrupted, loud music, hot weather

Favorite Food: Chocolate Mints

Favorite Drink: Grape Juice

Favorite Color: Cerulean blue

Hobbies: Tennis, honing her skills with her sword, relaxing

Personal Facts:
• Blaire has a slight obsession with chocolate mints and carries a small pack with her at all times.

Abilities:
• Skilled with a sword
• Quick Thinker
• Excellent Reflexes and reaction time

Friends: Chester Chipston, Aurora Luntane, Drake McStrype

Rivals: Scarlett Chypon

Enemies: Raxton Klawzax, Scarlett Chyphon,

Relatives:
• Rachael Fields-Mother
• Alexander Fields-Father

Items/Weapons:
• Sapphire Blade-Blaire’s main weapon, a cross between a longsword and a saber. The Sapphire Blade is a cerulean sword. The hilt is a dark blue.
• Night Vision Goggles-A pair of red goggles with orange lens
• Carries a pack of chocolate mints with her at all times.
• Sometimes dons a pair of black sunglasses with dark blue rims.
Weakness:
• Practically defenseless without her sword
• Does not have very good balance
• Blaire does not fight well in extreme heat

Fighting Style: Blaire prefers the grace and style of a sword. She uses various slashing tactics to defeat her opponent, her favorite method involving her forming a vertical semi-circle with the cutting edge. Blaire slowly moves the blade in a curved motion, and then quickly shifts it upward. This almost always ends with the sword in an upright position, giving Blaire some protection if her foe strikes back. She is calm in the face of danger, and will not back down until either she or her opponent is defeated. However, she had strong moral values and fights to disable her opponent, not to kill them.

Personality:

Blaire is known for her spunk and cool-headedness. She is extremely loyal to the resistance cause and is willing to do anything she can to help bring peace back to Mobius. Calm and collected in the face of danger, Blaire takes great pride in her sword-fighting skills and often spends an hour at a time honing her abilities. When she’s not practicing with her Sapphire Blade or on a mission, this young husky can be seen relaxing with her back against a tree. While by no means a solitary Mobian, Blaire prefers solo missions for some reason. However, she does work well in a team, when she needs to. All in all, Blaire is a kind-hearted husky, and is always ready for action.

Quotes”
• “You know me, always loyal to the resistance cause.”
• “O……kay, I didn’t see that coming.”
• “Yes, I like chocolate mints. I mean, who wouldn’t?”


History:

Blaire Fields was born in the capital city of Mobotropolis during the reign of King Maximillian Acorn. She is the only child of Alexander and Rachael Fields.

Shortly after Blaire’s first birthday, war broke out between the Kingdom of Acorn and the Kingdom of Blaclend, an enemy sovereignty. The Blaclend ruler, King Jonathon, had held strong beliefs that the Acorns were ruling over territories that the Blaclends themselves should decree. The avaricious and power-hungry king held a private conference with King Maximillian, believing he could get him to surrender the land. Max, however, refused to believe those territories belonged to the Blaclends, and made it clear he wasn’t going to surrender it.

This action left King Jonathon Blaclend with few options-give up, or declare war on the Acorn Kingdom. Furious, Jonathon sent an army to ‘reclaim’ what he thought was a former Blaclend territory. When a spy for King Acorn saw this action, he told the monarch, who sent his own army to the territory in return. Thus, the Great War was born.

For several years, the Acorn Army fought a losing conflict against the Blaclend Army. Blaire’s father, Alexander, was among the many drafted, and could only be home once every several months. Meanwhile, Rachael tried to make life as normal for her young daughter as possible, with reasonable success. Blaire was enrolled in Mobotropolis school when she was four years of age. She would often play with her friends after school at a local park, or near the palace fountain. During the rare times when Alexander was home, the husky would take his small family to Oakland Village, a place his father had taken him to when he was a boy. Blaire didn’t know it yet, but this place would be much more important then she thought.

Meanwhile, the Great War continued to shift in the Blaclend Kingdom’s favor as the Acorn Army received heavy causalities. That is, until a scientist by the name of Julian Kintobor offered his services. King Max accepted his offer, hoping whatever Julian had in mind would help turn the tables on this war.

Julian had built a massive army of highly advanced robots known as PEACEbots. It was quickly realized that the android soldiers were highly capable in combat, and the conflict soon shifted in the Acorn Kingdom’s favor. In the year 3224, King John, realizing his armed forces were practically defenseless against the PEACEbots, finally surrendered, making the Kingdom of Acorn victorious. The Great War was finally over.

Grateful to be permanently home at long last, Alexander wasted not a moment making up for lost time with his family. Rachael, happy her husband was back and that the family was whole again, arranged for them to take a vacation to celebrate. The Fields spent two weeks in a northern city. But when the husky family returned, Mobotroplis was not how they left it.

The Fields arrived back in the capital city to find it completely transformed into a living nightmare. While wandering around in disbelief and shock, they came upon their house. It had been leveled to the ground. A friend of the family had gone into hiding nearby and soon noticed the huskies. He told them what had happened earlier that day-how Dr. Robotnik, the former Julian Kintobor, had staged a massive coup, successfully took over Mobotropolis, and converted it into an entirely different place-Robotropolis, and how he used an invention known as the Roboticizer to turn most citizens into mindless androids.

The Fields knew they had to get away from Robotropolis at all costs. It was Rachael who suggested they travel to Oakland Village. She told Blaire to bring anything of importance to her that they could salvage from their wrecked house. Scared, and not quite understanding of the situation, the eight-year old husky had managed to find a few cherished belongings amidst the rubble that was once her home.

When the Fields had gathered all they could, they began to sneak out of the city. By this time, the SWATbots, reprogrammed PEACEbots, were not yet out in full force. This gave them an advantage in fleeing Robotroplis.

Eventually, after several hours of walking, the husky family had arrived in Oakland Village. There, the Fields began their new life. Fortunately, they still had some money left over from their vacation and the citizens of Oakland were kind enough to help the family of huskies out. They soon got their lives back together.

For five years, Blaire had lived a pretty much normal life. Although she missed Mobotroplis, she grew to love Oakland Village as her home. However, this normality would not last, and Blaire would later find herself a supporter of an important cause.

A month after Blaire’s thirteenth birthday, two Mobians by the names of Raxton Klawzax and Scarlett Chyphon formed a secret alliance with Dr. Robotnik. They had once been members of the Oakland Resistance Division. However, after years of fighting a losing battle against Robotnik, the two had begun to believe that his rule was superior.

During a raid on Robotropolis, Raxton and Scarlett secretly broke away from their group and walked into Robotnik’s main chamber. The sinister dictator ordered the immediate Robotizition of the two intruders. However, Raxton had a proposition to make-at the cost of a few robotic parts that were lying around, Robotnik would get any Mobians he and Scarlett managed to capture from Oakland Village for him to Roboticize at his pleasure.

Seeing this as a chance to gain more Workerbots, Robotnik accepted the offer. (However, he didn’t let on the fact that was just using them to further his own selfish ambitions, and they would be Robotcized as soon as he was done with them.

Shortly afterward, Blaire found herself walking through a small woodland area. All at once, a piercing scream filled the air. Acting on impulse and worry, the husky sprinted back to the village. It was there that she and the rest of the Oakland citizens saw Raxton and Scarlett dragging a couple of Mobians into their personal aircraft, the X-7 Stormflyer.

A few members of the Resistance Division attempted to stop the traitors, only to be fired at by a recently installed cannon from the plane. With the Resistance members momentarily distracted, the two traitors made their escape, captured Mobians on board.

Seeing this, Blaire was filled with a resolve she had never been before. She wanted to help bring peace back to Mobius and prevent this kind of thing from happing again. She had decided to join the Resistance Division.

At first, her parents were reluctant to let Blaire join the division. However, they realized this whole thing could happen again, and would be important for her to learn some self defense. Since she couldn’t begin training in the Division until she was fifteen, she decided to take sword-fighting classes to get a head start. After months of practicing, Blaire eventually became pretty skilled with a sword. Upon completion of her training, the fifteen year old Siberian husky received a sword that would become here main weapon-the Sapphire Blade.

Soon, Blaire found herself in the Resistance Division Training class. After a year of difficult training, the canine was ready for her first mission- sneak into Raxton’s underground lair and bring back some stolen computer chips. She managed to find the chips, however she was soon spotted by Scarlett. Seeing Blaire’s sword, the traitorous Mobian challenged the teenage husky to a duel. Blaire had no choice, it was either that or immediate death. Her training had paid off-after a long and strenuous battle, Blaire had managed to emerge victorious. Scarlett however made it clear they would battle again, and since that day, they have been rivals.

Blaire soon became a valuable member of the Resistance Division, and to this day, she is always loyal to the resistance cause.

Offline Mini Profile
 
Johnny Boy
Member Avatar
Let the winds of change and fires of creation dance to my desire!
Pretty well thought out! Although I don't seem to completely sink into the story. This could be personal taste stopping me, though.

I give it a 4 1/2 stars, or 9 out of 10.
Posted Image
THE HAMMER IS MADE OF WANK.
Offline Mini Profile
 
HollyYoshiPosted Image
Member Avatar
I object to your claims
Since I'm using this character in the RPG Crisis Point, I thought now would be a good time to post her bio.

== I. Basic Information ==

Full Name: Aurora Lunetane

Alias: None

Gender: Female

Species: Timber Wolf

Alignment: Hero

Place of Origin: Oakland Village- a secluded village near Hilltop Zone

Place of Residence: Oakland Village

Occupation: Oakland Force Agent (The Oakland Force Union (OFU) is a well-structured underground Freedom Fighter-esque organization. Basically, they take reconnaissance missions during times of crisis.)

Team: Aurora is a member of Team K-87. This team also consists of Drake McStrype, Blaire Fields, and Chester Chipston

Team Rank: Second-in-Command/Mechanic

Socioeconomic Status: Upper-Middle-class


== II. Physical Information==

Height: 3.9 Feet (118.872 centimeters)

Weight: 81 lbs (36.741 kilograms)

Current Age: 19

Birth Date: July 25th

Physical Appearance:
-Close-lying pastel blue fur
-Long-snouted, crimson-furred fuzzy muzzle
-Crimson-furred inner ears
-Thin pastel blue-furred legs
-Pastel blue-furred hands
-Pastel blue-furred feet
-Crimson-furred abdomen
-Large eyes with light blue irises, black pupils, and glassy white sclera
-Pastel blue eyelids with two short eyelashes on either side
-Long, triangular, erect pastel blue-furred alert ears
-Shiny round, black nose with no apparent nostrils
-Long, fluffy pastel-furred tail
-Thin pastel blue-furred arms

Body Structure:
Aurora is, in a sense, built for speed. While nowhere near as fast as Sonic, Aurora can clock speeds of up to 90 miles per hour (kilometers per hour). Much of the young wolf’s strength comes from her lower body, as she spends nearly every morning jogging. However, Aurora could use some work in upper body strength. She’s not feeble, no, but don’t ask her to do fifty pushups and expect her to actually be able to do.
Attire:
-A light green T-shirt
-A long white lab coat that extends to her knees
-Khaki pants
-A pair of purple gloves with a red wrist band.
-A pair of white sneakers with brick red trim around the bottom, and two light blue bands wrapped around the shoe.
-When riding Extreme Gear, Aurora wears a purple shirt with green sleeves, blue jeans with white running down from the knees, and light blue shoes with a green stripe running down the center.

Gear and Accessories:
- Night Vision Goggles-A pair of blue goggles with orange lens
-A small cell phone-like communicator, used to get in touch with her team mates
-Golden Charm: A golden crescent moon with a silver star on each end-the Lunetane family emblem. Aurora wears it on a white chain around her neck.
-Whatever she decides to make: Aurora is the inventor/mechanic in the group and has come up with several items to aid the team.
Vehicles:
-Astral Moon- a white Extreme Gear with a yellow border around it, and a thick yellow stripe running down the center. The Astral Moon has high top speed, average cornering, and low power.


== III. Mental Information ==

Intelligence: Aurora’s IQ is around 129. The wolf’s greatest mental strength lies in her technical prowess. She is capable of constructing many kinds of basic mechanical creations, although she does have her limits.

Personality: Aurora is a sweet and cheerful young wolf. She is quite optimistic, and always looks at the glass half full. Aurora has a positive outlook on life, and it is not often that you will find her in a downer mood. This young wolf is also quite sociable, and is great for confiding in.

Theme Song: N/A

Hobbies and Interests: Water Skiing, playing the piano, swimming, building small mechanical objects.

Likes: Music, water skiing, machines, chatting with friends, art.
- Gourmet of Choice: Strawberry Cake
-Beverage of Choice: Cola
-Favorite Color: Red

Dislikes: Football, laziness, injustice, sailing, silence.
-Least Favorite Food: Grapes
-Least Favorite Drink: Coffee
-Least Favorite Color: Grey


== IV. Combat Ability ==

Physical Advantages:
-Speed: Able to clock speeds of up to ninety miles an hour, Aurora has a large advantage against much slower opponents.
-Highly Acrobatic: With great speed comes great aerobic abilities. Aurora is capable of performing some pretty fancy moves and can use these moves to escape enemies’ attacks.
-Sharp Hearing: Those ears of her can catch even the faintest of sounds, providing there isn’t a lot of background noise. An unlike other Mobians with sensitive hearing, she is not bothered as much by high-pitched noises.
Mental Advantages (in combat):
-Excellent Aim: The wolf has great precision when throwing her weapon of choice, the boomerang-like Lunearang. This makes up for her bad throwing distance.
Physical Disadvantages:
-Low Upper Body Strength: Seeing how much of her strength lies in Aurora’s lower body (particularly in her legs), there isn’t much strength above her waist. This is especially true of her arms. As a result, Aurora has limited throwing range for her main weapon, and so she has to get pretty close to her target before she can strike.
-Low Endurance: Aurora can run fast, but not for long, as she tires quite easily. She does have better stamina at lower speeds though.
Mental Disadvantages (in combat):
-Focus: While Aurora has great focus during the start of a battle, the longer one such fight goes on, the more likely see is to lose her concentration, making her an easier target for enemies.
Weaponry:
-Lunarang: A lavender-dyed boomerang shaped like a crescent moon. It has a razor sharp silver point on each end.
Abilities:
-Lunarang Throw: Aurora throws her key weapon at her foe, inflicting damage with its sharp endpoints.
-Stellar Cyclone: Aurora repeatedly spins around in a circle, creating a whirlwind around herself and damaging any enemies that get in the way. If used while in midair, it can slow her fall.
-Tail Whip: Aurora turns on her feels and lashes out at enemies with her tail.
-Airstream Boost: Aurora is able to rapidly accelerate to her full speed, with a gust of wind surrounding her. Can be used to mow down enemies.


== V. History==

Family:
-Jill Lunetane (Mother, 45)
-Roger Lunetane: (Father, 44)
-Neo Lunetane: (Older Brother, 21)
-Aero Lunetane: (Younger Brother, 14)
-Ray Lunetane: (Younger Brother, 9)

Friends:
-Blaire Fields: (Husky, 19)
-Chester Chipton: (Chipmunk, 18)
-Drake McStrype: (Tiger, 20)

Enemies:
-Raxton Klawzax: (Cougar, 23)
-Scarlett Cyphon: (Fox, 21)

Rivals: N/A

Background Story:

-Age 0-4

Aurora was born in the town of Oakland Village, the only daughter of Jill and Roger Lunetane. The Lunetanes owned a popular coffee shop known as The Stellar Café, which Aurora’s older brother Neo is planned to take over following his twenty-fifth birthday. had sort of affinity for

Not long after Aurora turned three, her parents took her and Neo to Oakland’s neighborhood park. While there, the younger wolf decided to play in those half-buried tubes playgrounds often have. Inside one of the tubes, was a young Siberian Husky puppy about her age. The husky was curious about Aurora, who in turn wanted to know the identity of the small dog, and so crawled out of the tube to greet her. The husky greeted herself as Blaire Fields, and pretty soon, these two canines became the best of friends. They remained so, even to this very day.

-Age 4-10

It wasn’t that long before Aurora met Chester Chipston, the energetic son of a family of chipmunks that had just moved into Oakland Village. Blaire was the first of the two to bump into young Chester, while strolling through the woods. The Siberian Husky introduced her wolf friend to Chester shortly after. Aurora took to the young Mobian’s amusing personality almost immediately, finding him good for socializing in.

It was around six when Aurora began to develop a like for mechanical objects. She would occasionally spend a few hours looking at various objects, seeing what made them tick.

When Aurora was around ten years old, she was watching her favorite television program when a news bulletin came up. The newscaster told of a heroic rescue of a large group of Mobians by the Oakland Force Union. The pastel-blue wolf watched this bulletin with some curiosity, wondering just who the Oakland Force Union was. She later learned through Blaire that the OFU works similar to that of GUN, and the Freedom Fighters.

-Age 10-14

With that explanation, Aurora’s became even more curious about the Oakland Force Union. And so, she and her husky friend began their self-schooling regarding the OFU. It started out pretty simple, with them going over articles found in newspapers. Meanwhile, Chester had met a teenage tiger by the name of Drake McStype, and introduced the two canines to him. Aurora, finding it difficult to socialize with the cat, had to get used to Drake’s quiet nature. It took a while, but once the two Mobians got used to each other’s personality, they became pretty good friends.

And as Aurora learned more about the Oakland Force Union, she seriously considered joining the organization, feeling there was much good she could do as a member.

-Age 14-16

At first, Aurora’s parents would not hear of her putting herself in danger. They understood all that the Oakland Force Union does, and they knew it was a good organization, but they did not want their only daughter getting seriously injured, or worse. However, after the pastel blue-furred wolf convinced her parents that this was what she wanted to do-help other Mobians with the OFU-Roger and Jill finally allowed her to join.

With that, Aurora set out to learn some battle skills, starting with learning how to use a weapon of some kind. It was at a local weapon’s shop where she found a lavender colored boomerang. Aurora bought it, thinking that she could make it better. And so, the young wolf placed some razor-sharp metallic points around the boomerang’s end points, creating the Lunerang.

With that, she began her training. Months went by, and the Timber Wolf had gotten very skilled with her boomerang. Although she could not throw it very far, her almost precise aiming made up for that disadvantage. Now with her main weapon at her disposal, Aurora could begin training to be a member of the Oakland Force Union.

-Age 16-19

Before Aurora could be an agent of the OFU, she first had to train with the organization for a full year. The wolf complied and began twelve hard months of training. And once that year was up, Aurora found herself an official agent. Not only that, but she was named the Second-In-Command for Team K-87, in which Blaire was the leader.

The team’s first mission was supposed to be simple. Their assignment was to sneak into the lair of Raxton Klawzax, and bring back the computer chips Raxton’s henchmen had stolen from a Central City Plant. The job itself wasn’t all that difficult, although a battle between Blaire and Scarlett Cyphon delayed them a bit.

Shortly after that fight between Blaire and Scarlett, Team K-87 finally found those computer chips. However, Raxton and his henchmen appeared just at that moment and attacked the OFU members. They could not defeat all the soldiers, so they focused on escaping Raxton’s Lair. However, Aurora did manage to take out a couple henchmen with her Lunerang. Finally, Aurora and the rest of the team managed to get away from that lair, making their mission a success.

Soon, Aurora became a valuable member of the Oakland Force Union, and is always there to help out when needed.

== VI. Concept Information==

Intended Role: Friend of Blaire Fields/Second-In-Command for OFU Team K-87

Significant Meanings: I felt that the team needed a mechanic like Aurora, plus I wanted to experiment with a speedy character without making her too fast.

Incorporated Concepts: Aurora is based on a lunar theme-She is a wolf, which are often shown howling at the moon, and both her last name and main weapon have some variation of the word, “Lunar.”
Inspirations: Basic wolf traits, particularly her speed. I can’t remember the approximate speed, but wolves can run quite fast. A lunar theme also served as a basic inspiration for the character. In addition, Aurora’s name comes from the alternative name of the Northern Lights, Aurora Borealis.

Trivia/Miscellaneous Information:
-This is the SEGASonic version of Aurora. I also plan to create a version for the Sat-AM universe.


Comments?








Edited by HollyYoshi, May 9 2009, 08:53 AM.
Offline Mini Profile
 
Johnny Boy
Member Avatar
Let the winds of change and fires of creation dance to my desire!
Yes, comments. :D

Well, I like the story, and kinda reminds me of myself.
Except i'm a dude, and all that. XD

I give it a full 10.
Posted Image
THE HAMMER IS MADE OF WANK.
Offline Mini Profile
 
HollyYoshiPosted Image
Member Avatar
I object to your claims
What is it about the bio that reminds you of yourself?
Offline Mini Profile
 
Johnny Boy
Member Avatar
Let the winds of change and fires of creation dance to my desire!
The whole techie thing.
:P
And how I met a good friend at a playground.
Posted Image
THE HAMMER IS MADE OF WANK.
Offline Mini Profile
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
ZetaBoards - Free Forum Hosting
Join the millions that use us for their forum communities. Create your own forum today.
Learn More · Register for Free
« Previous Topic · Act IV: Artist's Showcase Yard · Next Topic »
Add Reply