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Hi I'm sonic read my new show; My amnesia is gone, close to true story
Topic Started: Nov 23 2008, 07:50 AM (148 Views)
Deleted User Nov 23 2008, 07:50 AM Post #1
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 Hey fans i'm screwed over by the company and a cult that a have a secret show they say , get this i the star too poor to affford cable they found me then stole one or two of my gloves and stole my ring too and say i can't watch the show, my old student my only friends i was an orphane i got robbed by bill and yea they found me and left me nothing i haven't even ever got a sonic doll and i'm him, but here you go i'm there ancient king here's a little of the story, we once lived on the other continent they forgot who i was after i had the pyramids built, they forgot who i was they tried to kill me so i ran across water and conquered and settled all of asia conquering it and decideing i would go back and judge whom wanted me killed and whom didn't so i returned asfter building great stuctures and such, i returned and the people whom disagreed with the ones whom killed me went north, from them i went and judged and saw who was a rememberer of the truth and a friend to the way of life those who remembered their ancient and so they seperated and we left the god forsaken continent walking on water. i had cleared the whole land for all my people and made a cast-all i was going to let the best and the brightest live ther, when i alone restoring their knowledge so that they could cross and come with me to a beautiful land i walked trough singing songs of creation raising mountains and hills for protection and great weather, when i took tem across and laned the first on the soil i remembered something changed, the people i can't remember but somehow i didn't get to show them my castall and they appointed a man head, they buit a community a house for everyone except myself...i didn't even get to tell them about my castall, i figured they must be right i wasn't good enough to lead them i only gave them a courty sung of pure love and friend ship conqureded every evil beast made sure every thing was perfect for them, i went back and secretly watched them waiting for the perfect time to make my appearance and saved them from losing their minds and memories some refused it's hard yo explain but you know if you were their we were the ancient and they were refusers of truth and trying to enforce a false way saying we aren't ancient and past life are lies, when we landed when i saved them and returned them to being immortal, upon landing i was no longer good enough to be head and they said it was now their land, i k felt so ashamed of myself and a failure i was such a failure they didn't even think of me or were i would live from how they treated me if i wasn't their king for saving them or had failed as a ruler so i couldn't even go to my castall i counldn't even show them my shame to this day it's not good enough for them i perfectly shaped each stone never hurting a particle but it wasn't good enough i was a failure i coundn't go there i had built it to live in with the ones i was going to train to be great learders... i went to my temple i was so excited and happy i couldn't wait to show them all i did for them and right when we arrived then shut me down and put a man in charge younger but older looking cuz he ate, i was so hurt i swear i felt so worthless you can't imagine thousands of years settleing the land for them pouring all my heart and soul into it casting so many an ancient magic you couldn't imagine making sure even evils could not stalk their dreams thinking the oh how my people will enjoy this and be pround of their great leader who didn't abandon them but got a whole new land just for them for not wanting to kill me for nothing, i didn't even tell maya i ruled i was active for some time but then started to stand i didn't really do anything to them they tried to kill me cuz i was just standing there in the pyramid all day in meditation, some didn't want it thats who i came back to get. So yea i went to my temple i didn't have a bbed and they basicly said i didn't deserve the my own workmanship so i just went there thinking how i'm a failure contemplateing i didn't have a bed and none was my friend so i would just meditate, i swear if i didn't feel absolutly worthless and undiserving which was their words on me basicly by their landing decision or so i felt since i had given them ths and they said i didn't deserve what i created i waited to see what i deserve and let them basicly have the land in their way and waited to see what they'd give me...nothing , for the dishonor of making that beautiful land and such things and leading them over i deserved nothing, in their eyes i was poor i had nothing i can say i stayed away for them after that for awhile tryng to meditate and figue why they didn;t like me i didn't get one thank you... i might have wept i'm not sure i sort of whent into a trans of self hate and pain and failure trying to figure out how i could have failed them so bad, i didn't weap histerically just silent almost and tears in slouched over meditation, i never slept constantly wanted to show them my good, but i couldn't figure out if this wasn't good enough what could be, i still feel ashamed today for not being good enough to be their leader after saving them i was the oldest and the most immortal and the most educated, i really went like mad or something my essence of consciousness went fuzzy i think it was going a bit insane from how they treated me,
i think their was a way an internal for my soul to leave the universe the hurt was that deep when i came to i had to go see what the community was up to i wondered if they had done anything in my honor unfortunatly they were to buzt their new ruler was up to somthing i think they never really liked me for some reason or at least not in the way i wanted i watched them for a long time and they never built mee even a shed to live in, ireally felt they didn't want me in their community since i didn't have a place to live i just ran all the time and grew stong the animals were sort of like my friends and this one day i came to finally get the beggin of what i thought might be a friend a hame and a family daisy.... that didn't turn out i never was allowed entering her house not just hers no one in the villages let me in their omes or said nice things to me their was some talk of me but that was just binga dirty orphane boy who's unrespectable and wild...i tried to ignore it, when i started hangout well just read my script it'll tell.


The Super Sonic Saturn Saga

obviously this is a bit open to creative tinkering to make it good with camera angels and stuff my team has training for figuring out together and testing from advanced society.

Obviously the story of hair is ancient so i'm leaving out some for respect of my team and my families histories. or rope but other things can be put n it and the first will obviusly having a connecting story from te other show to this one having to do with my team and my temple being that they are my students, and we actually have done training to create this show and i set up the company for I the greatest conquerer god of war sat-urn this is the saga or how they wrote it sega.


Super Sonic Saturn The hedge hog

Forge count opening scene: a boy sitting at an urn in lotus posture crying having nothing to hold, staring down at his hands.{{A FATHER DEAD GONE TO PLACES UNKNOWN OR UNREAL}}.as time shows passing with the sun, he turns from the urn slowly straighting his back getting taller and straighter, {{when going into it have two measures of time recorded one shot it shows right when starting how things start too slow down when going into meditation mabye to the point f seeing dust stop moving in middle air}}(what i mean is as i start time starts to slow down as i concentrate on one thought where did he go and kind of is there an answers? is there a way for him to be found?acceptance as lloking away that he answer must be waited to be given) ,then back to showing, after glowing for a time(time showing in sun rotations) opens his eyes suddenly with knowing of the truth the master equator see lifes ki in essence pure again and takes not a desprate attempt to look a way for a cemera but an instictual look balanced patince of deep understanding and wisdom no rush in it at all paired with slowly worked for gained absolute self control at a moment lasting the time it takes to fully recognize the answer and apply it and contemplate what your ebmarking into then on a note of acceptance and resolve taking the path, he disappers.

Cast count opening scene: A boy at a temple on high hill meditating inside, opens his eyes notices the camera and then turns his head the camera swerves on an unprecise angle of losing balance and then changes to staright again and looks to increase in energy the camera angle dissappears like as force of his concentration.

Set count opening scene: It has a camera shot of an outside near ttrees and stone with the moon and the stars i run stringing it wildy hyper fast from right ending the run on screen(to the left side or on the right depending on how large the view is(zooms) with a shiver and a a dragon growl that at he moon inproclimation of the night ruler, the stars he looks up to as in to destiny and then in recoginition of what he must do and fate then speeds off, as he does there appears in in the stars his picture saturns constillation( a real constillation him in perfectmeditation like in the first scene) and it comes to apperance in flashing(then fadin a little) to a sound. and spakeling falling stars shattered like flint speak hits on chimes or bells.

scene 4: their stands daisy in her back yard and they know the ones with the hedges behind it., She stands in center near entance out beyond looking out at the hedge serching lovingly hopeful, she calls, at the far reaches the hedge starts moving hyperfast as sonic blasts through it they follow and slow it down to hyper as he gows through you see the hairs pushing leaves away and the look on his face of wild chaos power underabsoulte control heading to his caller with all eagerness)

i show up out of the bush and all my hair starts to slick down still curling around to cover my nakedness (the eden god approachs with a shy smile) "hi" says the ophane god who led his people across the great water "daisy" shying and turning left and right a bit while walking but not being a afird like embarassed but proud and flirting hair all slick and smoothe (going like know i'm to sexy you noticed thank you appricative blush repeat to nwxt step(just a little of my charm)) {this is a man that gets hit bit head matial artist and doens't move or get hurt and goes "ooo" lik that hurt sort of thing } and continues onto say "what are you doing today sweeti" daisy replises with honest urning "hedgehod do you still love me" sonic replies "yes " moving a little more close, "did you miss me" sonic "yea" a little closer "will you accompany me to the flower field" the eden boy covering his body with hair shyly relpies with enjoyment and blushing embrace full of courage of the chi put on him (her parents probebly watching her with the orphaen child king king of their culture, flurting with her completely naked (bit they were all cool they remember god from eden he covered himself)) " anything for you daisy" taking her hand they go and walk to the flower field. mind you this is just the beggining she goes hyper later the teachings of hair and sonics training them to become supersonics. so they go through the flower field it's not to hard to write they go around look at the flowers, he, a friend to each flower and tree, looking at her and completely absorbed in her company and beauty, she shows his flowers and gets him to smell making small tak he turns into compliments on her for exampple she sticks herwhole face near a big flower bigger then normal and smells say" mmmmmm doesn't that smell beautiful" he looks at her happy at her enjoyment and replies "not as beautiful as you daisy" at shich she could gigle and smile blush and go forward to kiss hmm on the cheek he does his left to right thing then all of a suddenly hears a growl strtleing her he turns around in the drirection of the growl and does his sound as his hairs go stringy, a hariy beast stands in front of him looking to eat them, it goes for the left sees his step to cover dasiy, goes for right again covering the distance faster and ready to stop, in fury the animal growls looking like trying to go stringy but fails, sonic stares with a look of no fear but absolute control and deadly dedication, there is a moment of stare off when the animal goes to attack asfter standing still deciding to try for the kill, it charges as it comes near i show time slow down where it goes to hit me with the claw and reach up under grab it by the throat and crack continuing the force to throw it over to behind her dead sprawled on the ground, that's when the mind battle ends, stilll it standing there staring before it decided to attack, it has got it's warning, if it attacks it will know it attacks it's dead , it starts for him, in fury of the offer of it life given and regected sonic charges left jump hyper spring, right, left, right, off tree dive shiver hit twist grab throw that the movement when the shiver them the pull leave like a white light image of the hands and like a sucking of their white energyout of them and throwing it into a tree and then hypering after it hitting it head right at it hit the tree trunk and is solid aginst, whack, the beast is knocked unconcious. He slicks his hair turs around brushs off his wrist or about theres and goes "paa(sortov life pue + pa) hmm" looking like hiding his eyes in blushing and acommplishment but having a reason to look down(the brush) her waiting till he looks up, "thank you!..., you SAAaved me.." she starts kissing him and hugging him his hair staticly wraps around her as she holds him moving into closer embrace and starts kissing and that stuff, after awhile of that affection a call comes on the wind from her mother for a reason of the usual sort. She takes me out of my trans of affection and says " let's" in response to her being told to come home, and run hyper daisy thinking on the way "i can't wait to tell my parents the hedgehods so sweet, they'll be so impressed, he saved me from that treibble beast" so we go back and i in perfect manner and proud to be accompaning her go to meet her mother, her mother i won't write it but it can be wrote easily enough, say basicly that it's time to come in for a reason and that's enough play with the hedgehog he goes witha look and they cut to a scene later with her telling her parents how sonic saved her and how great he is and her father responding that he dosn't want he dirty hedgehog in his house (i might have used words like your looking lush) daisy would then argue the good points and that he doesn't know how amazing sonic is and the won day stuff. after it clips to him at the temple arriving and him being sad alone in his temple, the temple of saturn aka saturns, a lonely boy of eden crying thinking about his father he kiled and the mother he never hugged not changing his mind on it, wishing dasiy was there to sleep with him, his anger at himself for not being good enough for her or her family looking back on te great crossing and leading there people and putting a thought of not good enough in judgeing it like them, hating hoe i'm not good enough, on that note determining to do bettter he gets mad and goes hairy, leaving the temple at night to be with the animals hunting down the evil that stocks the community determined to to prove that i'm the greatest to everyone and that i diserve her and her love. He heads into the forest first and hears word of a frightened small animal deer like thing about be eaten right before the jaws close sonic hits it at hyper speed from the tress trearing the attacking animal (barakuda9or tiger or what night) witch turns like walking off after getting up kind of then springs onto a tree infront of it and off it at me in a fake,to it's right. and i trow it with it's attack on me and as soon as the animal raises it's head and looks at him he takes off slow enough for the cat to chase and it does after far enough sonic goes close and taps the animal on the third eye so fast that it barely has time to move and then leaves, back on his way to the town. as i get information that the animals scream at me of the need or the people for me and things of injustice, strangers to the villages, secrets, plans of meanesses, i find and pick up the trail of travellers actually secret assisins sent to kill the head of what they consider a rival family, or the head of it for one reason or another, the man was too nice and well off or sumthing i think, i follow their taril to a private estate since the birds told me of them saying something about murder, i see them waiting outside the court yard spying on him waiting for his family to leave his company to make their move, i sneak up and make myself known hair slicked down and ask politely "why are you in my village spying on mr.--------?" they look with a hahaha look at this soon to be dead kid he doesn't know what the **Bleep** he did he's dead , they change in look and draw their blades telling me to shut up and go to get me, i move dodgeing them then when they slow to realise i'ma threat and take ona anew thought of whom their dealing with and contemplate how tey should act as in to catch me or weather to continue, right when they decide they might run i turn hairy and start the attack, i can write the bttle with the walls and stuff like that and how i move with the wind currents and doa little tempestree in feel control, but it would take awhile i can tell you i know how to do. while fighting the family hears us out side and the father comes out with weapon to see the matter telling his family to go somewhere and hide in case, upon going out in the court he finds me finishing the job, He dimayed to see someone haddeling the attackers if there were some, there is some talk i hand them over to him he calls his clans and offered me stuff ina way our language was a bit different but i ddin't refuse but i couldn't accept anything i was just doing it to help and so after i left he called some families that might know whom the men are to see if they could figure out what clan had attacked hi also telling them about the super sonic hedge hog saving him from assasins or at least spoiling their plan before they faced him, and he was respected enough that it started me a hero reputation and working my way toward dasiys honor.(mid you this is not the exzact story but close and general the scene was a bit different stony sort of jagged in places, i left before getting reward) going ito a fading scene of him going back to helping people on his way to stop another death. The next day while going threw the nighbour hood witch was ofresty and field, he on his way somewhere when a boy of the neighbourhood throws a rock at him he takes the hit without moving stopping before hit and waiting after getting hit he goes "ooo" looking at where he hit not even red, he loooks at him with jelousy and hate, wanting to beat, "like that hurt" says sonic after which the boy unlearned yet does what his body wants to be a growl but is merely a little grr and atttacks sonic. not bothering with the battle and moving hyper fast out of the way and on his way to where he was going. lonely, no one to talk to, facing all the evil of the community never sleeping not one night unless i got the chance with daisy, you can show him going through the forest talking to monkeys and such things doing faavors for animals or training kind of thing, or looking for plants for people none of them can find with a certain song that are rare, just day to day stuff could make whatever, or playin games or any number of things, stopping by daisy' s for a hi and hugs or what not and a good nights wish, then more of the same well not really but i remember when she heard of what i was doing for the community she was proud tho i think this covers about enough for a show. obviously i still want her and love her and want to do this show to find her plus help everyone. it progresses with our group building up of kids from the community through different interaction with me becoming part of my temple then going super sonic stringing covering all the basic stuff you should know about the gifts the creator gave people in their bodies and the ancient stories, how their hair works and more to do with stuff i don't wanna give away cuz it's dragon clan teachings why their are secrets to the body that came before hair. obviously this is way incomplete but if you like sonic please e-mail me back, magnusiii87@hotmail.com
 
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