L - Raven

Aug 16 2011, 03:59 PM

Still disapproved. I know what sonic speed is, also Sonic goes sonic speed. Thus, any character that goes sonic speed is god-moding, period. It doesn't matter if its his 'top speed' or not. You don't need sonic speed, or any kind of 'speed' based power to begin with. You have flight and fire, plus two guys that you rarely carry(this doesn't make much sense), so you don't need to be super fast. Fix your character.

caracal492

Dec 18 2011, 07:00 PM

I'll use my first and most worked on character is Ace. Look at the spoiler for more info.

Spoiler: click to toggle

Name: Ace Prower (he is Tails's brother)

Gender:Male

Apparent Age: 4-6

Actual Age: 5

Species: Fox

Appearance: He has very light yellow fur, grey eyes, and wears had-me-downs from Tails. He hides his weapons (wires he uses like a taser gun) in his gloves. He is also much shorter then Tails.

Personality: He is very independent and probably has Napoleon Syndrome where he tries to prove he can handle himself. He is a little hot headed and at times will taser someone if mad. Other then this he can be very patient and plan out his next move.

Skills/Powers: Enhanced senses, gathers electricity quickly which he can channel through his wires, some characters can't see him, until he hits or talks to them, if they aren't smart, and his taser move is where he lashes his wires out for a long range electrocuting attack.

Equipment: Ace has two wires that he uses like tasers, and he always carries one Chu2 bomb on him. (Look up Sonic Battle Tails's special moves)

Strengths: Ace is always literally listening for trouble, he can easily dodge enemies if they're noisy, and he can easily hit enemies.

Weaknesses: He is blind which makes it hard for him to find his opponent, he has to recharge after tasering someone so he can't taser rapidly, and he can't take heat.

Starting lesson 1.

Ace has been flying since the sun came up to a place he heard Tails went to last. By the time he gets there it's midnight. When he reaches the beach he passes out. When Ace wakes up he sees a stranger who speaks of danger. Ace gets up, brushes himself off, spits out some sand, and tells the stranger "Yeah, yeah. Just stay out of my way and you won't get hurt." With that Ace takes his wires out, cracks one like a whip, and storms off into the wilderness.