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| A Smoking Demise Part 2 | |
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| Topic Started: Aug 25 2008, 12:10 PM (97 Views) | |
| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 12:10 PM Post #1 |
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As the two freinds weightlessly drifted along the portal, Smoke saw and image of him and his girlfreind, Jenny, in a wedding chapel. "Aw crap im gunna marry her?" "Marrage is not the end Smoke, Starin' don the barrel of a .44 is the end." "Gunpoint is not the end! Remember that bank job at Station Square?" Smoke was reffering to when Him and the rest of the West Side Kingz gang robbed the Station Square Bank.After having 26 S.W.A.T officers aim AK47's at each of them, Smoke and Murray decided to live a life away from crime. Their discussion ended when the weight kick in and threw them in front of Smoke's house in Green Forest.As smoke entered his house, he saw that he had been robbed, and where there was once a painting in front of a vault, there was an open sake with the WSK calling card in it. "Those mutha-****in' gangsters!! They stole the Non-Element!" The Non-Element is the equivilent to the master emerald.The N.E was essential to Smoke gaining his ultra-powerfull MegaShot form,and all powers of the 8 elementals are super-charged to above maximum power, in which the gems are not required to use powers, the strength is increased, and the ability to levitate, as he cannot swim. Smoke quickly grabbed his two Tec9 SMG's and headed out to the new leader's house. The Fox and wannabe-mexican hippo hopped into smokes car and prepared themselves for a gang fight they would never forget. As they raced down to "Big Jim's" house, some WSK gangsters shot out their tires, forecing the two to fight the squad of WSK's before making their way to Big Jim's crib. After defeating all the gang bangers and reaching Big Jim's crib. They noticed he had grown much larger. Even taller than 7 foot 3 Smoke. Smoke whipped out his gun's as Murray Tried to weakin Jim with a couple powerfull blows to the head and a steel chair to the balls. Smoke unloaded his guns on Jim's head and had to rely on melee attacks now. After an hour of battling Jim finally lay on the ground, dead. Smoke took back what was rightfully his an telleported back the the house. Smoke put the guns and N.E back in the safe and changed the combo to 823. Then, the phone rang, Smoke picked up the phone and heard Jenny's voice. "Um, Smoke?We need to talk.Come over to my place in 15 miniutes.*click**dial tone*" The End...TO BE CONTINUDE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| lilsonic | Aug 25 2008, 12:24 PM Post #2 |
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Why are you making a part 2 in a different topic when your first topic didn't even start. And by the looks of it, it seems like your not making an rp but just typing a story, which does not go here. You need rules, plot, bio sheet, ect. all you have is a story... of what I don't know because I didn't read it because it looks like something I should be reading in the fanfic section. If you don't know how to create your own rp I suggest you join some rps first to see what it takes to make an rp. after you've participated in enough rps, then you can make your own. you could also pm some people that have made rps to help you with yours. do not post a topic saying you need making an rp and have nothing at all to go on. pming works better, less topics the admins have to close. |
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| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 01:33 PM Post #3 |
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i joined only a couple of hours ago and i need to say that, you are blind because right under part 2 there is A Smiking Demise. it might not say part 1 but its part 1. and im making it in another topic because i have a bunch of unrelated comments on prt 1 so i started part2. get it through your wee little head you sissy baby ghurl |
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| lilsonic | Aug 25 2008, 01:44 PM Post #4 |
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.... yea, ok. I see where this is going. 1st off, you have no plot, no bio sheet, no rules posted, all you have is a story. that wont get you anywhere. and you should of kept it in the same topic anyways because you didn't even start the first. let me change that around so you can understand better. you started the first one, but the rp it self was never started because no one joined or even posted an intro topic of their own. you say you have unrelated post in the first one. well if you've had done what you were suppose to do, their wouldn't be unrelated post in your topic. which means, by your way of thinking, your going to make a third topic because you'll just consider this as an unrelated post. but its not. I'm trying to help you, but your being different so help your self and lets see how far you get. your welcome by the way. |
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| Bouncy | Aug 26 2008, 02:46 PM Post #5 |
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Character Name: Bouncy Species: Hedgehog Abilities: Ability to jump high with springs. Height: ??? Description: Bouncy use's his springs to reach high places most other people can't reach. Edited by Bouncy, Aug 26 2008, 03:01 PM.
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SHELL: WHERES THE PIEPIEPIEPIEPIEPIEIPIEPIEPIEPIEPIEPIEPIE Bouncy: Oh god | |
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| Tux Coyote | Aug 26 2008, 03:32 PM Post #6 |
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Honestly, there is no point for a part two, if you never completed the first one. So what if the first one contained small conversation? You can still continue from there. Do so, yes?
Edited by Tux Coyote, Aug 28 2008, 07:01 PM.
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| Miracle | Aug 29 2008, 02:14 PM Post #7 |
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What lilsonic3089 said was right. Take it easy. What you did IS wrong because you're supposed to offer the bio sheet, the plot, the blah blah blah. Before I even read lilsonic3089's post I agreed with him. This whole thing sounds like a fan fic. If you don't know how to make an RP then it's OK. just try to learn more about it. What you wrote to the person that was trying to help was pretty uncalled for. |
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