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| A Smoking Demise; The SB debut of Smoke | |
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| Topic Started: Aug 25 2008, 10:05 AM (82 Views) | |
| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 10:05 AM Post #1 |
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Character Name: Smoke Species:Fox Abilities:Super Strength (natural),Telekinesis(unnatural),Time Control(unnatural) Height:7 foot 3 inches Description:A Gaurdian of the 8 Elemental Gems, Smoke uses the abilities of the gems to use spaecial powers such as Time Sphere and Telekinesis to eradicate the demons of the evil Dr. M |
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| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 10:31 AM Post #2 |
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Falling from the sky, Smoke attempted to use the powerfull Time Sphere move to stop this freefall.After failing his attempt, Smoke realizes that Dr. M stole the Light Elemental Gem. Without his elemental, all smoke has is his strength.Then, his freind Murray parachutes down and has a dark glow in his pocket.The overweight hippo grabs Smoke and gives him a purple gem, The Dark Elemental.Smoke uses his Telekinesis to grab a wing off Dr. M's plane.smoke and murray hop onto the wing and Teleport with the powerfull Time Sphere. Smoke hadn't practiced the move enough so the ended up in the Arctic. Not being dressed for the cold weather, they had to keep moving to stay warm. As they moved quickly through the mountains, the cold air some how keeped them warm.It was then that Smoke saw a blue glow at the bottom of the mountain.Smoke quickly jumped off the make-shift snowboard and rolled into a ball. He figured if he coud gain enough momentum, he could grab the Element and Teleport back to his home in Green Forest.After grabbing the Jewel, Smoke hit a roke and fell unconscius(did i spell that right?). A half hour later, Murray arrived on the wing, grabbed the gem and attempted to teleport to the forest.Murray always wanted to be like his best freind but he was just too big. He then saw that the two Elementals were linked by a thin stream of energy. "I wonder if these can make Taco's?". Smoke then woke up and grabbed his Elemental Gems and shouted "TIME SPHERE!" As time slowed to a near stop, the two freinds experienced the familliar weightlessness and images of the past and future... TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!! |
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| RaDaR125 | Aug 25 2008, 10:45 AM Post #3 |
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Please, use the edit button instead of double posting. And, it would of made more sense to post an introduction in Knothole Village.
I fixed your spelling, please watch out because I'm with the Grammar Compliance Commission. But, on a personal evaluation, if you tighten up the grammar this looks pretty promising. So please, try and keep up the good ideas. |
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| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 10:54 AM Post #4 |
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where did i double post? i just joined and i just realized i didnt make a profile 4 murray and ty 4 fixin' that. o ya and how do u get those gems under ur name? |
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| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 10:58 AM Post #5 |
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Character Name: Murray Species:Hippo Abilities:Taco, being fat & farting bullets(lol) Description:A young and EXTREMLY overweight hippo, 'El Murrayoso' dreams of being just like Smoke.Only 18x the weight and referring to himself as 'El Murrayoso' just because he likes mexican food. Edited by Chaos-Z823, Aug 25 2008, 11:01 AM.
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| RaDaR125 | Aug 25 2008, 10:58 AM Post #6 |
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Post often. And the start post still counts as a post. |
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Best Sonic Music Video EVER! Ah... The joys of the Nintendo 64! Shadow | |
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| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 11:02 AM Post #7 |
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but how do u get the gems under ur pic and i need sum1 to help me make this RP |
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| RaDaR125 | Aug 25 2008, 11:08 AM Post #8 |
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First up, try not to use text talk. Second, if you post enough, you go up in ranks and earn titles. Please refer to this. |
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Best Sonic Music Video EVER! Ah... The joys of the Nintendo 64! Shadow | |
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| Chaos-Z823 | Aug 25 2008, 11:18 AM Post #9 |
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ya mean like now when i got that ring? |
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| RaDaR125 | Aug 25 2008, 11:19 AM Post #10 |
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Yes. That's exactly it. But this isn't the place to talk about that. |
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