Three Keys Of Fate

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Three Keys Of Fate
Topic Started: Aug 17 2008, 10:59 AM (151 Views)
lilsonic	Aug 17 2008, 10:59 AM Post #1
Nights Into Dreams Posts: 4,167 Group: E-Rank Legend Member #746 Joined: March 19, 2007 Blog My Blog	"There are many worlds, but they share the same sky. One sky, one destiny." With that said, this is a story I've been working on. Yes, its has the Kingdom Hearts theme to it. But not to worry, I wont give away spoilers or focus on it so much that those who don't know what Kingdom Hearts is or never played the game before will get lost. I'll fill you in as the story continues. You'll see tons of characters I have used in many rps here and some new ones. This story takes you to many different worlds that I've thought up or used in other stories I have written. And yes, even the great blue blur, Sonic, is in this story. All the important characters will be linked to a picture of them and maybe even a bio of them so be on the look out for the links. I hope you enjoy this adventurous story and please let me know what you think of it. Adventure Begins With Darkness: Star lights fill the dark black sky. The stars shine with a wondrous light and glow a magical white. The random order of the stars placed in the sky makes it seem so alive yet they remain still and motionless. Giving off wonder to those staring upward at the sky. As glorious as they are, the number of them is what really strikes the mind of thoughts and possibilities of life else where then here. So many worlds to look at, yet there all in the same sky. so many worlds wrap around our world, and our world wraps around many other worlds, joining with other worlds to become a part of a night sky to another world. And to think as you gaze upon those shining worlds that share one sky, they are all gazing back at you. Its like our worlds are already connected some how. And not just our worlds, but our hearts are to. Sharing that same feeling of wonder and adventure. Having that same deep feeling of being moved by something so wonderful and something so simple as gazing upon the night sky, into the hearts of other worlds as they gaze back a yours. But what if as you gazed upon these worlds that seem so peaceful, darkness was present. And while you remain safe on your world, the very shining glorious world you stare at was in distress, was being taken over by some evil darkness and at that moment dieing. How would you know? How would you feel? What would you do? Would you be scared, fearing that since your world is connected to that dieing world, yours would have the same fate? What if it was your world, dieing and being filled of darkness? How would you feel then? Would you think of your world, or the other worlds that are connected to you? Would other worlds care if yours is dieing? After all, if each world shares the same sky, then each world shares the same fate. fore every adventure begins with darkness. A young teen age boy by the name of Fray lays on his bed with his eyes shut. His hands are behind his head with one of his legs propped up. By the look of his facial expression, he is not sleeping but thinking. He looks disturbed on what he is thinking and seems to not give up on these thoughts, as if replaying an event in his mind that makes him slightly angry. As he lays there the moon light is the only light shinning into his window which is on the other side of his room. His room is fairly big, with a black computer desk which has a laptop placed on it and a few cans of soda placed around the laptop. The way the moon's light shines on the wall it looks to be an aqua color. His floor is rugged with some imprints on it here and there, as if he changes his room around from time to time. He is clothed and lays there with his sneakers on and his blankets tossed to one side of the bed bundled up. Out of frustration he breathes heavily as if annoyed with what he is thinking about. "Why did she mean by that anyway." He speaks out loud to himself as he keeps his eyes closed and still looks slightly mad. He begins to think of his conversation he had with a girl named Kate. "I don't know what I want Fray! I'm just... just... I feel trapped Fray. Like if my heart is somewhere else, but my body is still here." "What are you talking about Kate? We have each other, we have our friends, we have our families. What do you mean your trapped? Is it because me you feel trapped, is it?" Fray asked with concern and confusion in his eyes. She simply lowers her head at his question. "No. Its... Your life is prefect Fray. You carry no burdens. Its like, your free." She says softly and with a slight smile at the end of her sentence. "What ever it is Kate, I'm here for you. And thats never going to change. We'll stay together here, you and me Kate. We'll pull through. Trust me." Fray tells her with a smile of comfort. She slightly raises her head to meets her eyes with his blue eyes, which she always gets lost in them as they give off some kind of peace to her. "No Fray. That can't be." She speaks softly. Fray's face becomes slightly shocked by her comment. "I tried to give you my heart Fray, but... My heart is not with me anymore. Its somewhere else, out there." She tells him softly and smiling as she looks up at the stars coming out in the dawn sky light. Fray looks even more confused and frustrated. He couldn't reply to that, so he follows her lead and raises his eyes to the stars and gazes at them by her side. "What did she mean by that? Why can't she just tell me the truth?" Fray asked himself as he lays on his bed. He sighs still eyes closed and continues to think. "Its some where else, out there" He thinks what she said and starts to think of this thought. He starts to remember all the times he looked at the stars. He remembers himself laying on his roof above his bed room window. His house is only one floor so falling off wouldn't hurt that much. As he remembers he slowly starts to drift off to sleep, making this thought become some kind of dream it would seem. He lays there on his roof, gazing up the stars and looking at the countless number of them. His eyes then focus on a star which he stares at for while, like if something is calling him to keep staring at it. As he stares, something begins to happen. Its bright shinning light begins to fade and die down. He stares more at it intensely. It pluses as if dieing, or losing its shine. Bit by bit it starts to fade away and die down, and bit by bit his heart become more troubled. Until finally the star vanishes, leaving an empty space where that star should of been. "Its some where else, out there." Kates voice echoes out as he sits up and begins to look about concerned and slightly frighten. "All those stars in the sky are many different worlds Fray. But ya know, even though there are so many stars, they share one sky Fray. As well we share one sky to those stars. One sky, one fate." The voice of Fray's uncle tells him as he starts to dream of when he was a little boy. "Whats a fate uncle?" Fray asked his uncle as he gazed at the stars. "Well now, fate is something very important. Its something you'll have to figure out what is it when your older. But just remember, no one can ever give you fate, but you'll always receive fate. alright, Fate." His uncle replies with a smile. Fray smiles back but suddenly, he is a teen again and in front of his house. He sees himself and Kate standing there face to face. Then, a pink glowing heart rises out of Kate and floats into the air. She smiles and mouths the words "I'm sorry." Fray watched as she turned into a dark black figure. He watches his house starts to become engulfed with darkness. Everywhere around them starts to fill with darkness, spilling out slowly and swallowing everything in sight. Fray starts to panic and begins to run as he watched his other self get eaten by the darkness along with Kate. He runs down his street as the darkness begins to pick up its pace and chase him, eating the trees, light poles, telephone polls, cars, houses, everything. As he runs part of the darkness behind him starts to take the shape of him, like an evil version of himself but completely black and with yellow circle eyes. Two of them were created from this darkness and race after Fray, catching up as he runs with all his might. His heart races with fear he continues to get chased. Then, the darkness around him races ahead of him, and starts to zoom towards him from the front with with two dark forms of him self chasing him from behind. He starts to scream no and get away from me. He panics as the darkness rushes towards him with such speed. Suddenly the darkness tackles him and starts to cover him as he kicks and screams, like if being caught in a web of dark matter as it engulfs his body. He continues to kick and tries to break free but the two dark forms of him catch up and leap towards him with death in there eyes. He screams and shouts more when suddenly he wakes up in his room with a shout as he quickly sits up and pants a little. He looks towards the window and sees his front yard and the moon with all the houses, trees, and so on. Giving a sigh of relief he wipes away the sweat from his forehead and looks down at his bed calming his pants and breathing normally. He then looks forward at the end of his bed and his heart snake to his stomach as his eyes widen in disbelief. At the other end of his bed stood a Shadow Heartless. It stared at him but did nothing. frozen in fear and shock, Fray stared backed, waiting to be attacked or even killed by this dark black being. But it did nothing and stared, as if waiting for him to do something. Fray finally snaps out of it after several minutes and swallows hard as he starts to think about moving towards it. "Wh..What do you want?" Fray asked fearfully but showing some confidence. After not getting a reply Fray swallows again not sure on what to do next. "Are you... going to kill me?" Fray asked lowering his voice as he mentioned the killing part. Again, the heartless didn't reply. Fray looks around to see if anything else would randomly pop out and kill him or if there were others. Still frighten but some how a little sure that it wont attack him, he decides to move slowly towards it. Trying not to startle it somehow he moves slowly and gently by first getting into a crawling position. With his hands and knees he begins to move slowly towards the heartless which is now looking around his room as if its not really concerned for Fray. Moving one limb at a time he makes his way towards the heartless but slowly, trying not to make loud noises. "I'm not going to hurt you... okay... so just stay clam... I'm not going to hurt you... I'm a nice person... okay..." Fray starts to talk to the heartless to some how make it feel safe around him, though it seems like the heartless already feels safe with him there from the start. finally, Fray is within touching distance of the heartless. He swallows hard as he looks upon the strange being. he slowly raises his hand towards the heartless. "I'm not going to hurt you..." He tells the heartless as his hand nears it. Suddenly the heartless moves towards Fray and makes his hand touch its head. Fray slightly scared tries to back away but as his hand touched the heartless a bright white light shined from the heartless, slightly blinding Fray and made him shield his eyes with his arms. The bright light could be seen from houses far away. The light soon dies down and Fray slowly uncovers his face. His eyes soon set upon a black cloak type robe. Fray looks up and sees now a man with a black hooded long robe standing on his bed. "Every adventure, begins with darkness." The man, known as Wizdom, tells Fray. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Finding Light In Darkness Fray looks upon Wizdom confused at his statement. As well, thinking about the action that just took place. A strange dark being was transformed into a human by him simply touching its head. And just where did this being come from? Fray's mind was thoughtless and couldn't think of anything to say at the moment, as Wizdom just stared upon him with a look that brought slight fear yet comfort at the same time. Before Fray could scramble a few words together in his mind to spill out, four more heartless bash through Fray's window. Fray backs up against the wall in reaction to the loud shattering of glass while also seeing more heartless. Even though he did just touch a heartless, these four seemed more active and lively. They seemed more reckless and controllable, which gave Fray the first hint that these four heartless were not just going to stand around like Wizdom did. There yellow glowing eyes set upon Fray as if they have found their target. But suddenly, two blades of lighting pierce two of the four heartless, making them exploded into black dust. Frays eyes widen in shock and wonder. He then quickly looks to Wizdom who was now facing the remaining two heartless, holding one blade in each hand. The only thing Fray could think of at this moment was that Wizdom is suppose to protect him for some reason. But why protect him if Wizdom was one of them? "Are.. Are you my... Guardian?" Fray asked as he looked back at the two heartless who now drew there attention on Wizdom. Wizdom just glared upon the heartless, but not with anger, with shame and pity. "No. I am a Heartless." He replies then leaps forward as the two heartless do the same. He tackles them both back out the window where they disappear from Fray's sight. Fray's eyes widen as he watched Wizdom attack the heartless. Feeling unsafe that Wizdom is not near him he jumps off his bed and races to the window. He sees Wizdom slice one of them and quickly the other, making them both explode into black dust. A strong wind blows by which makes Fray shields his face with his arms for a moment. He looks up and sees some kind of dark swirling vortex. As the vortex spins counter clock wise it starts to become windy. A hard bang at his bed room door made his heart jump and his body become tense as he quickly looked to his door. The bang sounded again, but this time harder then before. Fray was frozen, he wanted to run but for some reason he couldn't move. In stead of a banging noise this time, the door burst open and breaks off its hinges as a bunch of heartless rush into his room. Filled with fear he leaps out his window and races towards Wizdom to be protected and saved from these creatures. The heartless rush after him, leaping at him which makes it harder for him to run. Stumbling over his mothers plants and tripping on the stoned walkway the heartless begin to catch up to him as they leap at him wildly. Looking back at the heartless he finally gets his footing right and starts to dash off towards Wizdom. but when he looks in front of him, instead of seeing Wizdom his eyes set upon more heartless. Filled with fear and helpless he quickly slides on the grass to stop himself from running into the horde of heartless in front of him. He quickly looks to his right and spots Wizdom, fighting off another horde of heartless. Focus on not wanting to die and wanting to be saved he rushes towards Wizdom with slight joy that Wizdom didn't leave him. As he runs the wind starts to pick up more and become slightly more violent. Suddenly, Fray slides to a halt yet again as he fixed his eyes upon the ground before him. Heartless began to rise out of the ground in front of him, blocking his path to reach Wizdom. He looks to his right and goes to run but yet again the heartless began to rise out of the ground and blocking his path. He glances left and the same thing was happening. He looks forward again and sees Wizdom, fighting and taking out the heartless, but as he does, it seems more just keep coming. Wizdom fights and fights and defeats them but more keep coming. His focus on Wizdom was broken when a Heartless leaps towards him, making him jump back in fright as it missed him. Now panting and taking a few steps back, Fray was trapped and helpless. He didn't know what to do. Looking behind him as he sees more heartless he panics more. A sharp cry of pain catches his ear and makes him look towards Wizdom. Wizdom was overwhelmed by heartless. There were so many of them that Fray couldn't even see Wizdom anymore. "Nooo!!" Fray shouts as he watches the heartless overwhelm Wizdom. Another heartless leaps at him and he leaps back but barely avoiding the attack. Fray was now afraid. He didn't know what to do. A loud far away scream was heard. His eyes widen in pain as he knew that scream. "Kate!!!" Fray shouts as he looks towards her house. Heartless were seen on her front yard. "Kate!! I'm coming!!!" He shouts as the loud scream echoed again. Another heartless leaps at Fray but this time he didn't have time to jump back. The heartless tackles him to ground and the rest of the heartless begin to hurry towards them. Fray holds the heartless back with his arms to stop it from it attacking him. Kate screams again, making it ring loudly in Frays ear and making him grow angry. "Noo!! Hold on!! I'm coming Kate!" He shouts but she screams again, making him more frustrated and angry. "Get off of me!!" He shouts to the heartless as it wildly tries to attack Fray but is stopped by his arms pushing it away from him. "Get off!! I need to help her!! Ahhh!! I wont let her go!!! you can't have her!! you hear me!! I wont let her GO!! AHHH!!" Fray shouts from his heart and suddenly a bright light comes from Fray's right hand. The light covers the heartless and Fray which shines so bright it makes the gathering heartless stop in there tracks. The light dies down which makes Fray open up his eyes. The heartless that was on him was gone. Fray was about to sit up but he felt something in his hand. he lifts his hand up and sees a key-blade. But not just any key-blade but his own key-blade, the Fate Key-Blade. He looks at it in amazement and wonders how did it appear in his hand, and whats it for. But marveling over it would soon be interrupted as two heartless leaped at him while he lay on the ground. having his eye catch the airborne heartless he quickly slashes the key-blade as the heartless descended, making them explode into black dust. Having witness this, Frays attitude quickly changes as he smirks looking at his key-blade. But his eyes soon catch something else. As the black dust fades from the defeated heartless, two pink hearts form and start to rise up towards to sky and then slowly vanish as if going through the sky. Fray was puzzled at this point. He watched Wizdom fight the heartless and each time Wizdom defeated one they just turned into dust. But now, when he defeated them using his key-blade hearts came out. Frays thoughts were quickly shoved aside as he heard fighting from where Wizdom was. "Hang on! I'm coming!!" Fray shouts towards Wizdom as he jumps to his feet and races towards Wizdom while eying the horde of heartless that stands in his way. Instead of having them make the first move he quickly leaps forward and slash upon two of them, making them explode into dust and release pink hearts. Puzzled by this again he stopped for a moment but soon continued. He leaps into action and begins to fight off the heartless that stands in his way, performing combo attacks, dodging attacks, maneuvers he would have never thought of, and in a way not thinking of it much but going on reflexes. Filled with glee and the thrill on how he can now fend for himself and somehow do these attacks and battle against these heartless, he starts to enjoy this somehow, like if he just became some kind of hero it would seem. But his focus remains, which was to aid the one who saved his life in his bed room. As he starts to clear his path, Wizdom was holding his own. Wizdom fought the heartless differently then Fray did. He was holding back it would seem. Trying not to kill too many and really pushing them or tossing them aside. But as he keeps on holding back more and more continue to attack. He didn't want to kill the heartless, for Wizdom was a heartless himself. Frays shouts caught his ear, but he ignored them at the moment, trying to keep himself alive first. He heard Fray shout again, but this time it was of anger. He heard screams from Kates house, then he heard Fray shout more and more. Wizdom was now angered himself that Fray was in distress. Changing his attitude towards the heartless he slices five in five and quickly takes out seven with his other blade. "Forgive me, but you've angered me enough. I WILL regain my control over you, and then we shall continue what was unfinished." Wizdom tells the heartless and begins to attack violently upon the heartless, decreasing their numbers greatly with each stroke and each attack he performs. As Wizdom draws near to Fray he can slightly see him. As he fights something bright catches his eye. He looks towards it and sees Fray welding a key-blade. Wizdoms eyes narrow in anger. He stopped fighting to view Fray clearly. Fray leaps towards a heartless and slices it with skill, making it turn into dust and release a pink heart. Wizdom's eyes flash a bright yellow as he watched the pink heart that was released from the heartless rise into the vortex and vanish. "No.." Wizdom speaks softly but with anger as Fray defeats another Heartless making it release a heart. "Nooo.." Wizdom grunts a little louder and filled with more anger and rage. Fray quickly and swiftly slashes his key-blade and takes out four heartless, having their hearts rise up to the dark vortex sky. "NOOOO!!!" Wizdom shouts and explodes with electricity. In a flash thousands of lighting blots are casted upon the heartless around him and Fray, taking out every single one and leaving just them two standing. Fray was taken back by this powerful attack but also confused on what just happen. He quickly looks towards Wizdom and goes to walk towards him but stops and stares at him instead. Wizdom had his head lowered and his arms outward, showing Fray that he was the one that did the attack. But Wizdom had a thin yellow aura around him and his head was lowered like if he didn't want to look at Fray, which made Fray slightly on edge and nerves. "uh.. Hey....um... are you okay?.." Fray asked taking a step closer to Wizdom but still slight scared. Wizdom heard Frays foot step and quickly lifted his up toward him with anger and rage in his eyes. Fray took a step back, and subconsciously tighten his grip on his key-blade, ready to fight. "You... Your the key-blade welder..." Wizdom states with anger. Fray looked confused and concerned. The very person who saved his life is now looking at him as if he wants to kill him. "Uh... key-blade, welder?" Fray asked confused and little frighten by Wizdoms attitude towards him. "The weapon you hold in your hand is called a key-blade. Its use for a few things..." Wizdom tells Fray still with narrow eyes of anger. "A few things?... like what?" Fray asked not sure where Wizdom was going with this. "Sending the hearts of heartless into Kingdom Hearts!!" Wizdom shouts which makes Fray take a step back in slight fear but also makes him tighten his key-blade more. "heart...heartless?... you mean those things we attack?" Fray asked slightly understanding... "Yes... each time you defeat my kind, the heartless, with that weapon your aiding the Nobodies in obtaining their goal!!" Wizdom shouts in anger. "Nobodies? what are you talking about? I don't want--" "Enough!! I can't let you feed Kingdom Hearts with the hearts of my kind!! It ends now!" Wizdom shouts as lighting bolts form in his hands which then forms into two blades. Fray quickly grabs his key-blade with both hands and readies his himself for battle, but he wishes not to. He is confused and not sure of whats going on. He doesn't want to fight the person who saved his life. As Wizdom begins to charge his blades with lighting, Kate's scream rings out again but louder then before. Fray suddenly looks to her house and tighten his face with anger. "Kate!!" He shouts then looks back at Wizdom with frustration and anger. "Look! I don't know whats going on here! And I don't know what I'm doing wrong! My friend needs my help right now and I can't stand here and try to figure out what your talking about while you try to kill me! Let me help me friend first! I don't care what happens afterwards just let me make sure she is alright! You could fight me after she is safe!" Fray shouts to wizdom as he noticed the wind started to pick up in speed, blowing everything about and making it look like a hurricane is about to hit. Wizdom tightens his grip on his blades and thinks of the words spoken by Fray as his robe flaps rapidly with the rushing wind as well his hair follows the wild manner of this strong wind blowing. Seeing Fray squint his eyes while glaring upon him, his cloths waving about as the wind rushes on. "Faith... I care not about what happens to me. They can kill me for all I care. But as long as your safe, what ever happens to me wont matter..." Wizdom thinks to himself as if he said those words to someone before. Fray just stared at Wizdom in anger as he waited for a reply from Wizdom. Wizdom was silent for a moment as he thought. But he soon let down his guard as he still glared upon Fray. "Follow my lead, I'll take care of the heartless." He tells Fray loud enough so he can hear him as he looks towards Kates house. Fray grinned and rushed to his side. "Sure thing, no problem... Uh, hey. Before we do this, and encase something happens, my name is Fate." Fray tells him, remembering how his grand father use to call him Fate "Fate. hmp, it seems we will share the same one then. I'm Wizdom." Wizdom tells Fray as he scouts Kates house as if counting how many heartless there are but also thinking about if they will save her or not since the wind seems to get stronger. "Wizdom, I'll remember that. And uh, thanks. For saving my life back there." Fray tells him with a slight smile but focus on Kate's house. "Thanking me now wouldn't be wise. We're still not safe yet... now lets go." Wizdom tells Fary as he starts off with a slow jog towards Kate's house. Fray smirks and nods as he follows close behind Wizdom. As they start to pick up speed, they noticed the wind starts to become stronger and stronger. Kate screams out again, but this time, they see her. She flies through the air like if being pulled by the the strong winds from the dark vortex. She grabs a hold of the corner of the rooftop on her house, struggling to hold on. "Kate!! Hold on!!" Fray shouts as he follows Wizdom to her house, hoping they will make it in time. "Fray!! Help me!!" She shouts back seeing them as she tries to hang on. "I'm coming--" Fray suddenly starts to lift off the ground by the strong winds and begins to panic. "Ahh!! Wizdom!!" Fray shouts making Wizdom stop and quickly grab a hold of Fray's hand, trying to pull him towards the ground. "Wizdom! Help Kate!! You'll never make it trying to help me!!" Fray shouts to Wizdom as the wind muffles out some of his wording, but Wizdom understood him. He nods and lets go of Fray. Fray screams as the vortex starts to pull him in. He watches as Wizdom dashes for the house and leaps high over the heartless and onto roof. He races towards Kate as the vortex pulls Fray. Wizdom and Kate disappear from his sights as he was pulled into the vortex where everything became dark and silent. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ In A Town Called Neglowen Frays mind begins to wonder and leave him in his thoughts for the moment, having him gaze upon many stars as he sits with one knee propped up. He sits on nothing it would seem, for all around him is pitch black. even the sky on which he gazes upon is pitch black, all but the stars. "Fray!" a voice rings out which catches his attention. he begins to look about and soon spots a young girl running towards him with a smile and waving. "Kate?" he replies as he stands up and greets her with a huge once she arrives. She smiles as they embrace then release so that she may catch her breath. holding her chest to try and breathe normally she smiles at him and they gazes into each others eyes, as if wanting to say something to each other but are caught in a love trance which they both can't break. But it soon gets broken when she moves her head to lok behind him "Wizdom!" She shouts with glee as Fray turns around to soon spot the dark robed heartless with his arms crossed and looking upon the stars. upon hearing her voice the dark figure turns his head toward them as if greeting them. "Hey Wizdom, what are YOU doing here?" Not knowing how to respond to Wizdom's appearance the young teen asked a likely dumb question. "Do you even know where 'here' is?" The robed one replied which made the pretty young girl giggle some and leave Fray slightly confused. Upon hearing those words he being to look around himself in wonder. "Yea, what is this place?" He asked out loud and confused. "If you think this is your death then think again. speaking of which, this IS your thoughts. or rather, your mind." Wizdom explains as the young one listened in amazement. "My thought!? so, how did you get in my head!?" he asked slightly concerned and even more confused. none of this made sense to him. "You humans are so simply minded." The dark one replies as he looks upon the stars once more. "Hey! whats that suppose to mean!" Fray replied in slight anger but knew he meant no harm by it. Wizdom then looks upon him and nods, making the key blade appear in Fray's hand. Startled by this, Fray gazes upon the key blade, admiring it. He turns his he towards Wizdom but sees he is not there. he quickly looks to his right where Kate once stood and she too was gone. now more concerned and angry he begins to slightly panic as he looks all about, trying to see someone or something in this darkness. "Calm your self. there is no need to fear. What you hold is light, and it can not be tainted by darkness. Whether you found it, or it found you, none the less, you have found the light in darkness." Wizdom's voice echoed all around him as he gazes upon the key blade more and holds it tight. "Hey... hey kid. wake up." A voice calls to Fray which made him turn around. he sees a tan male with jet black spiked hair. confused at his comments Fray doesn't know how to reply, so he remains silent. "Hey, are you dead? come on kid, wake up." The spiked hair male raises his hand and suddenly releases it upon Fray's face, causing a slapping sound to echo while setting everything in slow motion as his face turned in response to the slap. Fray's eyes begin to open as he starts to hear some commotion far off somewhere. He looks straight a head and sees a building that he would never see at home, or anywhere else he has gone besides his home town. He stands up to find himself in some type of alleyway. ignoring the commotion for the time being, he looks all around him and sees strange awkward looking buildings. some are tilted to one side, some are oddly shaped, some are fairly big in size and some don't even look like houses but just shapes. as he begins to walk out the alleyway he can see more buildings, and it would look like many buildings from different planets all thrown together in on giant town. As he scanned the buildings with his eyes, he suddenly looked up and saw a sight that made him gazes upon it as if he would never it again. it was the sky, but this sky was not like the one at home. the blue color of it was perfect, the clouds were fluffy and pure white. The sky it self shined like a jewel if you looked at it right. but something caught his attention that made him think some and clearly state that where ever he is is not at home. though the sky shined and the clouds where perfect, he saw no sun at all. It was day time indeed but no sun was present. Fray's ears twitch when he heard a shout ring out near by. following that shout came the sound of flames or fire being unleashed with force as well as slashing. Fray rushes to the commotion as the sounds begin to grow louder and louder. someone was fighting off something it would seem. Running as fast as he could, he would hope the one who is fighting would be Wizdom. As he round the corner the first thing that caught his eyes were yellow beady eyes of many heartless running about. Coming to the halt at this sight his mind begins to race and think of the event that took place before, watching Wizdom hurry towards Kate while he was getting sucked into some kind of warp in the sky. Thinking of this and not knowing what has become of both of them made his heart fill with anger. Making the keybalde appear in his hand, Fray glared upon the heartless as they raced for something near by. Before this anger filled teen could react, a ray of flames lashes out and crashes upon the oncoming heartless. the tan male in Fray's thoughts lands where the heartless were and readies his sword which was covered in flames. "If I had feelings, I'd be ticked off right about now... You heartless are worthless pest! How dare you attempt to cross my path! Extin wont lose, not to little pathetic heartless." the tan male shouts to more heartless coming towards him. but he didn't see the bunch of heartless coming from behind him. Fray did, and he quickly races over to the courtyard to help fend off the heart along this strangers side. Fray dashes forward and leaps onto a table to then leap towards Extin while holding his key blade at the ready. A heartless leaps at Extin but was quickly slashed into dust by Fray who lands behind Extin. The tan male turns around to see this young boy behind him. Fray leaps towards the heartless and slashes another, turning it into dust and making its heart rise to the sky. Everything suddenly gets set into slow motion as Extin's eyes glare upon the heart floating towards the sky, then focus on Fray's key. "A... Another KeyBlade Welder? and I though there was only one. I wonder if he too has a Nobody. I would have known about it if he did. then again, I'm not apart of that organization anymore." The slow motion dies and time goes as normal since Extin has taken his focus off of Fray. Fray continues to fight off the heartless as he preforms as types of moves to defeat them, dodging then attacking. rolling out the way and leaping with speed as he welds the key blade with vengeance and grace, as if he had done this many of time. Fray slashes down and splits a heartless in half, causing its heart to rise with the other heartless hearts he extracted. Focusing his eyes upon the last three Fray charges with all his might, readying his key blade at his side. but suddenly, a shadow was cast upon him from above. He quickly stops and looks up to see Extin high above him and with two flaming swords. the tan Nobody puts his swords in an X formation and starts to charge his swords, making the flames rise higher then before. Once charged he quickly lashes out the flames, making an X fire attack smash into the remaining three heartless and turn them into black dust. Landing in a crouched position, the Nobody reforms his swords into one sword then stands and looks over his shoulder upon the young teen holding the key blade. "Key Blade Welder, I take it. So, what would be the name?" Extin asked turning his body towards him while making his flam sword vanish. "heh, Call me Fate." Fray replied with a smirk as he rest his keybalde on his shoulder. "I didn't want YOUR name, I was referring to your key blades name. You do know its name, right?" the Nobody asked while putting his hands in his pockets. Fray looked slightly shocked and confused as well slightly embarrassed. he looked at his key blade carefully and thinks for a moment. He thinks back on what Wizdom told him when they first meet, how angry he was when finding out he was a key blade welder. "I don't know its name. it kinda just appeared in my hand. wait, before you get mad, I don't know what this thing is and I wont sit back and let the heartless hurt my friends. I just want to use it to find my friend." Fray tries to justify him self, thinking this tan male would react the same as Wizdom did. "he doesn't know its name? how odd. But he knows what heartless are, which means someone had to tell him some information. But does he know about Nobodies, or the organization. 'before you get mad, I don't know what this thing is and I wont sit back and let the heartless hurt my friends. I just want to use it to find my friend.' Why would he say that? unless he encountered someone who didn't like what he was doing with the keyblade. It must have been one of those Heart Found heartless that I was warned about. hmp, if I had feelings, I'd laugh at this kid for his lack of knowledge. yet, he welds that thing better then I've seen. could it be the keyblade, or the keyblade welder?" Extin's thoughts wonder as he glares upon the keybalde Fray holds. "umm, hello? are you okay? I said I just want to use it to find my friend, I mean no harm." The young teen repeats himself to snap Extin out of it. Extin then focuses on Fray again and shakes his head. "I take it the last person you meet was concern about you using it against the heartless. I have no problems with that. you do what you must, kill as many as you need to, if that is what it takes to find you friend." Extin replied which slightly confused the teen and also made him feel slightly afraid, for the fact that this tan male has not shown signs of any emotions. even when he was yelling at the heartless, there was no emotions, as if he always looks angry or ready to fight. "oh, alright then. but only to find my friends." Fray quickly replied as he didn't want things to become uncomfortable or awkward. "so now its friends? before you said friend, as in only one. In fact, you keep changing your wording around as if your confused yourself." Extin states very quickly, which made it seem he thought Fray was hiding something. "oh, yea... I guess I meant friends the first few times, heh heh." the teen replies slightly nerves but holding onto his keyblade as if ready to fight Extin. He didn't know why, but Fray wanted to fight him, but at the same time he didn't. maybe it was the way Extin kept glaring upon him. But seeing that the tan one has his hands in his own pockets didn't make him a threat. And for the most part, Fray doesn't know if he could trust him or not. "You don't need to explain your self. Being as you saved me, I shall do you a favor. I'll help you learn your key blades name. and since you were so kind to give me your name, I am Extin. We can talk more on the way." the Nobody tells him to lighten the air. and of course, upon hearing that Extin was thanking him, Fray nods and makes his keyblade vanish as he follows the Nobody out of the courtyard, which they left a mess. tables are tipped over, chairs are scattered about, trays are everywhere, it simply looks like a battle had just finished as the two walk off into the distance as heroes and head for the alleyways of this town called Neglowen. Edited by lilsonic, Sep 12 2008, 11:07 AM.
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Serenity	Aug 18 2008, 11:19 AM Post #2
the cute/sexy wolf Princess Posts: 1,503 Group: S-Rank Hero Member #1,946 Joined: August 15, 2007 Gender: Female Favorite System: Wii Current Mood: Hurt and on crutches	Woah!! this is awsome....even though I hate the game this storry has suspence keep it commin!!
	(theses were not made by me but to my bro on another fourm.)


Teh christmas Ninjeh	Aug 18 2008, 11:57 AM Post #3
dude...that party last night...woh Posts: 866 Group: D-Rank Hero Member #1,516 Joined: June 27, 2007 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox 360 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic 3 & Knuckles Current Mood: Dosen't care	(still reading while i'm posting) But so far this story is awesome. Kingdom Hearts was a good game but not the most exciting. The best part of kingdom hearts 2 was when you faught sephy. I like it so far. Keep it up! thumbs up



DragonFlame	Aug 18 2008, 11:58 PM Post #4
The Bringer of Flames Posts: 12,012 Group: X-Rank Mythical Legend Member #348 Joined: December 9, 2006 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox 360 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic & Knuckles	Hehe, i wonder how Sonic will involve him self into this. Apparently this is fascinating how much detailed and interesting use of language all at once. The change from different characters involving Fray is good, yet all things seem to happen at once. That's the mysterious part i can't still figure out. Anyway, a few words spelled wrong, but nothing i would start scavenge for. Apart from this, the story shows promise and i will keep looking as you update. I won't mind to say. Awesome story.
	Yahoo Profile: dragonflame85@yahoo.com MSN Profile: dragonfier6@hotmail.com Companionship Don't be shy. Join my last Role Play on Sonic Blast. Thanks to sMy Pancakes Spoiler: click to toggle You'll see at the first glance. A horrid face expression who will only grew tender by each counted second. If you look closely you will soon notice, there is no time to flee and thereby your struck and can't escape the inevitable of death. I am the Scandinavian Dragon that might confuse the brightest of them all. If you want a better description on what i just mentioned. Then send me a pm and i will take it slowly. This is my RP Rank overall within the Organization XIII thread. And I am proud of it. Spoiler: click to toggle Yay for Recruit Rank.


lilsonic	Aug 19 2008, 01:29 PM Post #5
Nights Into Dreams Posts: 4,167 Group: E-Rank Legend Member #746 Joined: March 19, 2007 Blog My Blog	Thank you guys. and yes, its kinda cool the way sonic gets involved. but like it says, all my stories mixed in one in a way.. thats including Royal. New chapter is up!! please let me know what you think of.
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DragonFlame	Aug 22 2008, 12:21 AM Post #6
The Bringer of Flames Posts: 12,012 Group: X-Rank Mythical Legend Member #348 Joined: December 9, 2006 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox 360 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic & Knuckles	Dude, i wonder why no one else is reading this. Meh, it might be something with Kingdom Hearts but i feel this is growing into one hell of a good story. I be looking forwards to the next chapter, don't give up on this you hear me.
	Yahoo Profile: dragonflame85@yahoo.com MSN Profile: dragonfier6@hotmail.com Companionship Don't be shy. Join my last Role Play on Sonic Blast. Thanks to sMy Pancakes Spoiler: click to toggle You'll see at the first glance. A horrid face expression who will only grew tender by each counted second. If you look closely you will soon notice, there is no time to flee and thereby your struck and can't escape the inevitable of death. I am the Scandinavian Dragon that might confuse the brightest of them all. If you want a better description on what i just mentioned. Then send me a pm and i will take it slowly. This is my RP Rank overall within the Organization XIII thread. And I am proud of it. Spoiler: click to toggle Yay for Recruit Rank.


Timothy Ulysses, Crusader	Aug 22 2008, 08:35 PM Post #7
Ugh... Gar no like green tea. Green tea is for foreigners, not gentlemen... Posts: 2,192 Group: =SB= Governors Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Chronicles: The Dark Brotherhood Current Mood: Bored Blog Wait... I have a blog?	Okay, a few key points (no pun intended, heheheh...); Story/Plot: Great. Keeps within the theme of Kingdom Hearts rather well. Admirable work. Grammar: Could do with a little tidy up in terms of capitalisation, but otherwise alright. Structure: You use the names of the characters WAY too much. Very little use of he/she. Here's an example: "Looking back at the heartless he finally gets his footing right and starts to dash off towards Wizdom. but when he looks in front of him, instead of seeing Wizdom his eyes set upon more heartless. Filled with fear and helpless he quickly slides on the grass to stop himself from running into the horde of heartless in front of him. He quickly looks to his right and spots Wizdom, fighting off another horde of heartless. Focus on not wanting to die and wanting to be saved he rushes towards Wizdom with slight joy that Wizdom didn't leave him. As he runs the wind starts to pick up more and become slightly more violent. " I got so sick and tired of reading 'Wizdom this' and 'Wizdom that' that I almost stopped reading. Try using some variety; perhaps calling him 'the enigmatic warrior', 'the robed being/man/whatever' or something. The same goes for the other characters too; try 'the shadowy creatures' or similar rather than use 'the Heartless' every time you refer to them. Obviously, the exception to this is in dialogue. Overall: A great start to a story. I await the rest eagerly.
	"I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the breadth of the land reducing all he touched to rubble..." Spoiler: click to toggle Pearls of wisdom (Currently looking for quotes that AREN'T mine): Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Venoma3d TUC...just just...dah why do I bother <__> Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader So, let's recap; Shadow's ring bracers aren't just some peculiar and incredibly dubious fashion statement; they are in fact devices (whether they be magical, mystical or technological in nature) used to contain his godmodded powers to a more bareable level that remains safely under nine thousand. They are also used to hide his emorific wrists. Am I following this properly so far? Spoiler: click to toggle SuperShadowgal If you do not use proper grammar, Lady Fury shall kick your a$$! Spoiler: click to toggle Miracle As far as I'm concerned, whether or not Shadow lacks reproductive organs, he's capable of loving and caring. Shadamy will never happen and shadsally was on an unoficial comic. The only thing I can add right now, is that shadsally seems to be the kind of thing TUC likes. Having them together in one spot just saves him ammo. Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader Amy Rose without a doubt; how can you not love Spontaneous Hammer Generation and Extraordinary Rage as powers? She owns many robots with her super pwning hammer. I think her problem is that if caught by surprise, she automatically drops her hammer, no Dexterity roll required (in case you're wondering, that was possibly another one of my epically failing jokes). Besides, to REALLY start beating things up, she needs to be 'in the zone'. The trigger seems to vary from time to time, from "Don't interrupt me while talking to Sonic," and "I'm pissed because I can't find Sonic," to "So-and-so insulted me," and "It's that time of the month again." Plus she's like Mr T in that due to the Law of Sheer Awesomeness, she can beat the crap out of anyone she wishes (downing an Egg Fort singlehandedly is a prime example of her awesome factor). It's a shame she can't pity foo's; then she'd be the epitomy of destruction. Thumbs up to the day Lady Fury learns Pity Foo'. Spoiler: click to toggle Um... help? Spoiler: click to toggle Wowzaa1 Banned because I LOVE YOU. Timothy Ulysses Crusader BANNED: For... wait, WHAT? Spoiler: click to toggle sMy PANCAKES Remember kids... naplam is used on OTHER people. NOT yourself. Spoiler: click to toggle Quote: Bones of Terror: Good, now Timothy have some company when he is online. Rouge X Darkness: About time. Shadow's missing his blades TUC, time to give them back <3 Timothy Ulysses, Crusader: What's that supposed to mean exactly? Rouge X Darkness: It means you can stop being an emo about being the only person from Down Under on here My fancharacters and my highly acclaimed Master Codex of Superpowers! ___________________ Artwork by Sniper, gif by sMy PANCAKES. Yes, ALL of my characters wield or have been influenced by magic or magical items. So? Spoiler: click to toggle Friends: sonicblaze, wowzaa1, DragonFlame, Beta Ray Banhammer, sMy PANCAKES, Miracle, FireFly, Talancir, lilsonic, Godzilla Firestorm, Cy-Fox, the King of Hyrule (wait, what?), ??? Please note that I won't add you without your asking first (because I'm paranoid or shy, one of the two). I have Facebook AND MSN! PM me for details. For the last time, YES, I hate Shadow!


lilsonic	Sep 12 2008, 11:08 AM Post #8
Nights Into Dreams Posts: 4,167 Group: E-Rank Legend Member #746 Joined: March 19, 2007 Blog My Blog	New chapter added. its called, In A Town Called Neglowen. I hope you all enjoy and thanks for your comments and advance which help me a lot!
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DragonFlame	Sep 14 2008, 01:37 AM Post #9
The Bringer of Flames Posts: 12,012 Group: X-Rank Mythical Legend Member #348 Joined: December 9, 2006 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox 360 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic & Knuckles	I admit, found some few spelling errors almost felt like you rushed through that part. Anyway i wouldn't even be allowed to say such thing, since i have no knowledge into writing without countless with false words and grammar. So by all that. I still like the new introduction of Extin, and also the way he were thinking. That was amusing and interesting. Your doing a good work and make sure to continue so that i may find an ending to this piece.
	Yahoo Profile: dragonflame85@yahoo.com MSN Profile: dragonfier6@hotmail.com Companionship Don't be shy. Join my last Role Play on Sonic Blast. Thanks to sMy Pancakes Spoiler: click to toggle You'll see at the first glance. A horrid face expression who will only grew tender by each counted second. If you look closely you will soon notice, there is no time to flee and thereby your struck and can't escape the inevitable of death. I am the Scandinavian Dragon that might confuse the brightest of them all. If you want a better description on what i just mentioned. Then send me a pm and i will take it slowly. This is my RP Rank overall within the Organization XIII thread. And I am proud of it. Spoiler: click to toggle Yay for Recruit Rank.


Timothy Ulysses, Crusader	Sep 14 2008, 03:02 AM Post #10
Ugh... Gar no like green tea. Green tea is for foreigners, not gentlemen... Posts: 2,192 Group: =SB= Governors Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Chronicles: The Dark Brotherhood Current Mood: Bored Blog Wait... I have a blog?	Grammar seemed a bit clumsy, but otherwise a great improvement on an already great piece.
	"I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the breadth of the land reducing all he touched to rubble..." Spoiler: click to toggle Pearls of wisdom (Currently looking for quotes that AREN'T mine): Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Venoma3d TUC...just just...dah why do I bother <__> Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader So, let's recap; Shadow's ring bracers aren't just some peculiar and incredibly dubious fashion statement; they are in fact devices (whether they be magical, mystical or technological in nature) used to contain his godmodded powers to a more bareable level that remains safely under nine thousand. They are also used to hide his emorific wrists. Am I following this properly so far? Spoiler: click to toggle SuperShadowgal If you do not use proper grammar, Lady Fury shall kick your a$$! Spoiler: click to toggle Miracle As far as I'm concerned, whether or not Shadow lacks reproductive organs, he's capable of loving and caring. Shadamy will never happen and shadsally was on an unoficial comic. The only thing I can add right now, is that shadsally seems to be the kind of thing TUC likes. Having them together in one spot just saves him ammo. Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader Amy Rose without a doubt; how can you not love Spontaneous Hammer Generation and Extraordinary Rage as powers? She owns many robots with her super pwning hammer. I think her problem is that if caught by surprise, she automatically drops her hammer, no Dexterity roll required (in case you're wondering, that was possibly another one of my epically failing jokes). Besides, to REALLY start beating things up, she needs to be 'in the zone'. The trigger seems to vary from time to time, from "Don't interrupt me while talking to Sonic," and "I'm pissed because I can't find Sonic," to "So-and-so insulted me," and "It's that time of the month again." Plus she's like Mr T in that due to the Law of Sheer Awesomeness, she can beat the crap out of anyone she wishes (downing an Egg Fort singlehandedly is a prime example of her awesome factor). It's a shame she can't pity foo's; then she'd be the epitomy of destruction. Thumbs up to the day Lady Fury learns Pity Foo'. Spoiler: click to toggle Um... help? Spoiler: click to toggle Wowzaa1 Banned because I LOVE YOU. Timothy Ulysses Crusader BANNED: For... wait, WHAT? Spoiler: click to toggle sMy PANCAKES Remember kids... naplam is used on OTHER people. NOT yourself. Spoiler: click to toggle Quote: Bones of Terror: Good, now Timothy have some company when he is online. Rouge X Darkness: About time. Shadow's missing his blades TUC, time to give them back <3 Timothy Ulysses, Crusader: What's that supposed to mean exactly? Rouge X Darkness: It means you can stop being an emo about being the only person from Down Under on here My fancharacters and my highly acclaimed Master Codex of Superpowers! ___________________ Artwork by Sniper, gif by sMy PANCAKES. Yes, ALL of my characters wield or have been influenced by magic or magical items. So? Spoiler: click to toggle Friends: sonicblaze, wowzaa1, DragonFlame, Beta Ray Banhammer, sMy PANCAKES, Miracle, FireFly, Talancir, lilsonic, Godzilla Firestorm, Cy-Fox, the King of Hyrule (wait, what?), ??? Please note that I won't add you without your asking first (because I'm paranoid or shy, one of the two). I have Facebook AND MSN! PM me for details. For the last time, YES, I hate Shadow!


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