The Darkness Within:Dark Armageddon

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The Darkness Within:Dark Armageddon; Sonic's dark side is unleashed
Tweet Topic Started: Jul 28 2008, 06:59 AM (4,148 Views)
Deleted User	Oct 24 2008, 04:35 PM Post #76
Deleted User	Miracle Oct 24 2008, 12:16 PM Maybe ee2_the_hedgehog was a bit blunt with what he said but I'm sure he didn't mean any insult. He was just probably agreeing with what you said in a joking kind of way. Besides, he said he liked this one. Also so true, Miracle.
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Lady Miracle	Oct 25 2008, 09:30 AM Post #77
[insert something cheerful here] Posts: 8,037 Group: Former Monarchs Member #9,289 Joined: August 20, 2008	OK, I'm just glad that's settled. Sorry if I get on your nerves constantly thinking you hate me. I should know you're not that kind of guy. I get what you say; seriously, I understand. I hate critics too which is why I didn't want to be one. I do suggest that if you think about leaving another link at the 'Urgent Reads' thread, you prepare for any kind of comment, whether it's negative or positive. After all, I kinda freaked when I read TUC's first post at my fanfic, but I knew that I had to take any critic and advice: it would help me more. And it did. DF and I didn't meant o insult you; just give you a friendly tip. Another reason I wasn't completely honest was because at the time I was your only reader and I understand it must stink to only have one reader that's constantly correcting you, which is why I shut my mouth. So like I said before, take it easy, calm down and think things throurouhgly. Thinking it over and over again might help you come up with even more ideas. That's all I've got to say.
	The Muffin Man's wife and a


~~Thrash~~	Nov 3 2008, 09:50 AM Post #78
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	i'll make the next chapter tomorrow. I'm kinda busy with my other fanfic. Edited by Thrash, Nov 3 2008, 09:51 AM.



Deleted User	Nov 5 2008, 04:42 AM Post #79
Deleted User	Um, you're a few days late with the other chapter.
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Lady Miracle	Nov 5 2008, 09:31 AM Post #80
[insert something cheerful here] Posts: 8,037 Group: Former Monarchs Member #9,289 Joined: August 20, 2008	Actually, he's just busy with the others one. He started this one before I started mine, so you can see how busy he is, I mean, mine took me an eternity! But give him a chance, OK?
	The Muffin Man's wife and a


~~Thrash~~	Nov 12 2008, 12:28 PM Post #81
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	I'll write the next chapter this weekend. I promis this time. And i'll continue my Thanksgiving fanfic tomorrow.



Lady Miracle	Nov 12 2008, 01:22 PM Post #82
[insert something cheerful here] Posts: 8,037 Group: Former Monarchs Member #9,289 Joined: August 20, 2008	Ummm... I sorta forgot what the last chappy was. It's just been a long time and I have a, ouch, headache and stomachache. I'll read it though. No worries.
	The Muffin Man's wife and a


~~Thrash~~	Nov 17 2008, 12:59 PM Post #83
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	CHAPTER 12: BATTLE IN THE MIST. PART 2 has finally arrived! Super Shadow and Dark Sonic were having a chaotic fight. They were thrashing punches at eachother with incredible speed and agility. 'Till their fists collided and they were holding them. "Give it up, Shadow! You can never defeat me!" Dark Sonic jesters him. "That's what you think! Prepare for some real pain!" Super Shadow replies. Then he knee kicks Sonic's stomache with remarkable force. "Guuunh!!!" Dark Sonic grunts loudly. Then Super Shadow upper kicks his face and sends him flying up in the air. Shadow teleports and appears in front of him. Then he uses an air slam upon him and sends him descending to the ground at high speeds. Shadow started going down after him. But suddenly... "Gotcha...!" Dark Sonic says in his head with an evil demonic grin. He breaks his fall and uses a move called... "Dark needle!" Dark Sonic unleashed a giant purple beam. Super Shadow didn't see this coming, but the beam hits him and sends him plummeting to the rocks with unpleasant force. "Oh no! Shadow!" Sonia screamed for her lover. Her eyes were trembling. "Pathetic piece of scum." Dark Sonic sinisterly chuckles. "Sonic, stop this! Stop this madness!" Sonia yells. Dark Sonic then used dark drain on her. "Aaaahhh!!!" Sonia was screaming in so much pain. "Sonia!" Amy didn't know what to do. Suddenly Super Shadow burst out the rocks he was trapped in. "LEAVE SONIA ALONE, SONIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Super Shadow had enough of this. He charged at Dark Sonic and elbowed his back. "GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!" Dark Sonic grunted loudly. Sonia fell to the ground. "Sonia! Sonia, wake up! Wake up!" Amy was worried alot about her friend. Cream, Rouge and Manic came in and crowded around her. She was still alive, but very weak. Super Shadow was still fighting Dark Sonic. "Chaos.....THUNDERSHOCK!!!!!" Super Shadow unleases a beam of static shock. It hits Dark Sonic and stuns him. He crashes into the ground. Super Shadow notices Sonia on the ground. He gasps and floats to her. Her skin was pale. She could barely breathe. He picks her up. Then, he places his hand on her forehead. A bright light started to shine. After that, she opened up her green eyes to him and smiled widely. "Shadow!" Sonia was very, very happy. She kisses his lips with so much love. After the kiss, she looked beside his shoulder and saw Dark Sonic charging at them. She gasps. "Shadow, look out!" Sonia shouts. He looks back and uses a chaos spear on him. He deflects it. He continues charging. Shadow throws Sonia and tries to backhand punch Dark Sonic, but he misses. Luckily Manic caught Sonia when she was in the air. So, Dark Sonic headbangs his head on Shadow's head, causing Shadow to lose balance. Now, for the finish, Dark Sonic used a powerful move called, 'Divine Insanity!!!!!!'. This move lets the user to attack the opponent with non-stop punches, kicks, slaps and pounds. Super Shadow was getting more weak with every punch. Dark Sonic dive punches Shadow to a wall. While Shadow lays there weak, Dark Sonic used his Chaos Lightning Havok Ray on the mountain, thereby plummeting a bunch of rocks onto Shadow's body, practically crushing him. "SHADOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Sonia screams loudly for him. She started crying on her brother's chest. "One rival down... and one sister to go." Dark Sonic raised up his hand to use a new move called, 'Evisceration Ray'. They were all scared by this. This was gonna be the end of their lives. Suddenly Shadow bursts out the rocks. His eyes were glowing red and his face had a very furious expression. Dark Sonic turns around, causing him to cancel out his most powerful move. "What in the hell?!!" Dark Sonic was surprised. Super Shadow growls. "SONIC! LEAVE... THEM... ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Super Shadow started charging up. "What is this?!" Dark Sonic was getting kinda scared by this. "CHAOS......ULTRA......BEATDOWN!!!!!!!!" Super Shadow summoned clones of himself. There were about 17 of Super Shadows. Dark Sonic checks his surroundings. "Oh, damn...." Dark Sonic says, didn't see that coming. They all attack him at once. So many Super Shadow threw out so many attacks. He was getting hurt really, really badly. They all swarmed up against him. They all grabbed him and threw him to the ground with a devestating crash. A light flashes in their faces. They cover their eyes cause the light was so bright. After the light lowers its bright shine, Sonia looked into the light and sees a black figure walking forewards. She thought it was Dark Sonic at first, but turns out it was... "Shadow!" Sonia felt extremely happy to see her true love alive. She ran to him and hugs him. He hugs her back. She repeadetly kisses his cheek, then she romantically kisses his lips. But this battle isn't over. The war still continues. Dark Sonic emmerges from the light. Shadow and Sonia look to him. Dark Sonic chuckles evily. "You may have beaten me this time...But next time, you won't be so lucky!!!" Dark Sonic flies to somewhere. "Count on it." Shadow says when Dark Sonic leaves. CHAPTER 13: DIRE CONSEQUENCES is next.



Lady Miracle	Nov 17 2008, 01:25 PM Post #84
[insert something cheerful here] Posts: 8,037 Group: Former Monarchs Member #9,289 Joined: August 20, 2008	Cool. I can seriously see a how much more better you've gotten at writing. Very good. Pardon if I now sound kinda of like a critic, but I'm trying to give you a wee bit of advice, if you don't mind. You were a bit repetitive in a few parts, that is, mostly repeating Sonic and Shadow's names a little bit too much in just one scene. It would help to add a few more pronouns there. I noticed something else: Godzilla Firestorm "Chaos.....THUNDERSHOCK!!!!!" Pokemon reference, am I right? Well, though I'm a Pokemon fan, it didn't seem all that fitting to give Shadow a Pokemon move, but hey. It's your story. Just thought I should tell you. Godzilla Firestorm This move lets the user to attack the opponent with non-stop punches, kicks, slaps and pounds. Super Shadow was getting more weak with every punch. Dark Sonic dive punches Shadow to a wall. While Shadow lays there weak, Dark Sonic used his Chaos Lightning Havok Ray on the mountain, thereby plummeting a bunch of rocks onto Shadow's body, practically crushing him. More Pokemon reference, but this time, this was pretty unnecessary. When you say, 'this move lets the user' it sounds like if it's part of a game instead of it being a narration, especifically the 'user' part. Other than that, I think it's better detailed and narrated than the previous chapters, meaning you're improving at a good pace. Keep up the hard work. And sorry if I sounded like a critic or an annoying teacher or something. Edited by Miracle, Nov 17 2008, 01:26 PM.
	The Muffin Man's wife and a


~~Thrash~~	Nov 22 2008, 06:12 AM Post #85
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	Here's a poster i made for this fanfic.



~~Thrash~~	Dec 6 2008, 04:59 PM Post #86
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	I'll make another chapter sometime tomorrow if i'm not too tired.



~~Thrash~~	Dec 14 2008, 03:42 PM Post #87
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	Chapter 13: DIRE CONSEQUENCES is coming soon.



Lady Miracle	Dec 14 2008, 03:57 PM Post #88
[insert something cheerful here] Posts: 8,037 Group: Former Monarchs Member #9,289 Joined: August 20, 2008	... I already forgot most of the story...
	The Muffin Man's wife and a


~~Thrash~~	Apr 22 2009, 04:15 PM Post #89
Fires of rage Posts: 3,873 Group: Game Over :( Member #9,245 Joined: July 27, 2008	man, this has been such a long time. should i continue? $:\$



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