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The Darkness Within:Dark Armageddon; Sonic's dark side is unleashed
Topic Started: Jul 28 2008, 06:59 AM (4,149 Views)
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That was really cool. BTW, I just adore your siggy! It even has Cosmo! So cute!
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Aug 26 2008, 12:09 PM
That was really cool. BTW, I just adore your siggy! It even has Cosmo! So cute!
Thanks.I thought it was too much.I wish i can make a real sig.Those pictures are from photobucket.I'll ask someone if they can make me a real sig.
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I'll write the next chapter as soon as somebody comments me.
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I'll check from time to time until there's a new chappy.
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Wait till i move so i can make a new chapter.I still gotta move to a new house.So i'll be able to make a new chapter till sometime later.
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I'm almost done moving,so i'll make chapter 7.

CHAPTER 7:WARZONE AND ALONE IN THE RAIN.

The troops of the Legion of Mobius were assembling.It was time for them to take action and attack Eggman's base.

"SOLDIERS,PREPARE FOR FREEDOM!THIS IS THE TIME,WE TAKE BACK OUR PEACEFUL PLANET!AND WE WILL DO IT BY ERASING EGGMAN FROM EXISTENCE!SO,LET EGGMAN WITNESS OUR WRATH!!!MOBIANS,ATTACK!"Nomak announces really loud.All the soldiers including our friends charged towards the direction to Eggman's new lair.Then suddenly,Dark Sonic appears.All the soldiers stop.Shadow comforts Sonia.And Amy gets really scared by the sight of Dark Sonic.Tails felt the same way.

"So....you puny little soldiers are gonna try and save the planet,eh?Ha!I find that hard to believe.So why bother saving it?You're gonna do nothing but kill yourselves.So you might as well surrender."Dark Sonic tells them.

"No way!The legion never surrenders!We've won every battle and we're not gonna lose this one!"Nomak defies.

"All right.Prepare to fall under your own ignorant hand."Dark Sonic sighs of disapprovement.He starts chanting some ancient text.

"What in the hell is he doing?"Raz wants to know.Dark Sonic raises up his fists and points it to the ground.All the soldiers fall down.

"What was that all about?"Nomak gets confused.

"Guys!Look!"Tails points to the ground.They all look.Something black was covering the ground.They started to bulge.Then suddenly the Killgak rise.Here's the info.

Killgak
Ancient evil dark chao that have been sealed away for 10 centuries.Covering their bodies is nothing but pure darkness and with dark maroon blood.Not very smart,but very quick and very powerful.They've waited for eternity to reawaken and reign again.
Now,since Dark Sonic brought them back from the underworld,the world is in deeper trouble.But they're very easy to kill.

"What are those things?!"Amy gets scared. =o

"They are the killgak."Nomak says.

"The what?"Amy gets confused.

"I'll explain later.Right now,we've gotta destroy these guys!Soldiers attack!!!!!!"Nomak commands the strike.The Mobius legion army and the 100 of the killgaks charge at eachother.They engage in a terrifying battle.They battle lasted mere hours.Some of the legionarres perished,but they weren't gonna give up.They only had 4 killgaks left.
Amy squashed on with her hammer.Knuckles and Rouge used they spin punch and screw kick attacks on one killgak.After they,they sort of....smiled at eachother.Shadow used kicked a killgak and used chaos spear while it was in the air and Nomak shot a killgak directely in the between the eyes of the face.They were victorious.Dark Sonic watched the whole thing.

"I see you guys are doing swell.Just swell.I'm impressed.But you guys aren't tough enough to defeat the mighty Eggman.See you around."Dark Sonic flies off.

"We'll deal with you later.Come on,guys.My scouts told me that Eggman's new lair is in the center of the Black Isle of Synerate.Let's move!"Nomak commands.They all move into the Forsaken Jungle.

Here's a list of places they have to go to get to Synerate.
The Forsaken Jungle.
The ice valley of Berg.
The volcanic land of Magmera.
The dark forest of Phantor.
The foggy landscape of nowhere.
The sandy land of Sunria.
The deadly path of monsters.
Spring valley.
The White Isle of Clouda.
The Black Isle of Synerate.

Luckily,they all had food for 7 months,enough water for 6 voyages,shelter and extra weapons.

THE FORSAKEN FOREST.
The forsaken forest was an evil place.Eyes staring at you.Owls hooting,crows eating dead bodies.The trees were the main things not to be trusted.For they had minds of their own.Good thing Lycros the Wolf knew this place like the back of his tail.After all,he was born here.Sonia was scared by the trees.She tightly holds on to Shadow.

"Shadow,i'm scared."Sonia tells him.

"It's okay.I'm here.Nothing's gonna get you.And there's nothing to be afraid of.Not while i'm around."Shadow comforts her.The legion kept going.They were all pretty tired.

"We'll rest here for tonight.We move on tomorrow at dawn.So get plenty of rest."
Nomak tells his army.They all setted up shelter and a campfire.The moon was barely showing.Amy couldn't sleep.So she went on a walk to find a hill.When she found a hill,she decided to sit on it by herself for a while.It started to rain all of a sudden.
She didn't mind.The rain was cold,but all she could think of was Sonic.And why he was so dark and evil.She also remembered that morning when her and Sonic were sitting on a hill overlooking the lake.And when their hands accidentely touched eachother.Then,
she could see it now.Maybe Sonic does care for her alot.But what she couldn't understand was why would he attack Shadow and Sonia.She wasn't sure,but she'll find out why.She was still sitting there.Singing to herself a lullabye very softely.A lullabye that her mother used to sing to her.And soon she will sing it to her own son or daughter.The lullabye she was singing was the one we all know.Somewhere over the rainbow.Unless,she does have a child.Sonic is the only guy she wants.So she's gonna try and find out the secret to the darkness within him.She got up and went back to the camp.She wasn't soak n' wet cause the rain was only a gentle drizzle.She went inside a tent and went to sleep.

Meanwhile in Eggman's lair.

Dark Sonic returned.He turns back to regular Sonic.

"Master Mephiles?"Sonic asks.

"YES,SONIC?"Mephiles replies.

"I want to see more of my son.I want to see the future again."Sonic requests.

"If that is what you want,i'll show you."Mephiles approves.The whole room turns into a living room of Sonic and Amy's house.They were both playing with their 5-year-old son,Thrash.Thrash was a black hedgehog with orange flames on his quills,spikes,tail arms and legs with purple eyes.Sonic was 20 and Amy was 17.They were pretty proud parents.Sonic loved the sight of his future.He never knew what it was like to be a dad.
Thrash was more like his mom than his dad.Although he did have some simularities of his dad.Speed,confidence,adventurous behavoir,strong hatred for Eggman(even though Thrash doesn't know who Eggman is),and the ability to use the chaos emeralds.And he loved the game of baseball.Then the future living room turned back to reality.

"Did you enjoy it?"Mephiles asks.

"Yes.Now i know what to name him.So,when is he born?"Sonic asks.

"December 3rd this year."Mephiles tell him.

"Ok.December 3rd.I hope Amy's okay."Sonic says.

"She's on her way here to the lair with the legion."Mephiles tells him.

"And i'm guessing Shadow and Sonia are with her too."Sonic gets a mad look in his face.

"Yes."Mephiles tells him.

"Well,i'm gonna get them away from her and my future son.We attack tomarrow."Sonic
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CHAPTER 8:THE MOVE ON.And one more thing,i kinda don't like fanfics that have nothing to do with Sonic and the gang.
Edited by Thrash, Sep 3 2008, 11:07 AM.
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Interesting. I really like it. Um, I was wondering if you could check out my fan fic. I know it's really long and I understand if you don't feel like reading it. It's just that I posted it about last week or so and no one has replied...
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So,how much do you like this story?I'm kinda certain you love this fanfic.It's not my best one,but it almost seems like my best one yet.This and Reign of Godzilla.Here's all the stories i wrote back then.I wrote these on 4kids.TV.

Sonic and the gang meet Viewtiful Joe.

Sonic in Jurassic Park.

A long lost love.

Damien the Vampire Bat.

If there was gonna be a Sonic X season 4,they should put in the following characters.

Blaze the Cat

Silver the Hedgehog

Mephiles the Dark

Jet the Hawk

Wave the Swallow

Storm the Albatross

Marine the Raccoon

Metal Sonic.

Ok,i'm done.

"WHERE'S MY COFFEE!I WANT PHOTOS OF SPIDERMAN ON MY DESK RIGHT NOW!NOW WHERE'S MY FREAKIN COFFEE?!!!" J.Jonah Jameson.
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You know what?Maybe THE DARKNESS WITHIN is kind of a crappy title.Maybe i should call it something else.I got different ideas for this fanfic.

DARKEST HOUR.

THE BLACK LINE.

BURNING SOUL.

BLACK HEART.

THE MONSTER INSIDE.

HIDDEN LOVE.

THE DARKNESS UNLEASHED.

FIGHT FOR THE FUTURE.

THE DARK CURSE.

DARK LORD'S NEW SERVANT.

THE DARKNESS: DARK ARMAGGEDON.

THE DARKNESS: DARK OBLIVIAN.

or SINS OF BETRAYEL.

Take you picks,people.If you guys agree on one thing the most,that's what it should be used as.Later.
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Take it easy, sweetheart. Yes, the story is pretty interesting. I like it. As for the title, I think "The Darkness Within" is a good title. But to change it, I think it'd be best if I read a little more about it before deciding, OK?
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Take it easy, sweetheart. Yes, the story is pretty interesting. I like it. As for the title, I think "The Darkness Within" is a good title. But to change it, I think it'd be best if I read a little more about it before deciding, OK?
You really think so?I guess i could keep it the way it is.But THE DARKNESS WITHIN is already taken by some other guy.Not here,but on youtube.So,i'd rather go with THE DARK CURSE,THE DARKNESS UNLEASHED OR DARKEST HOUR.I'll put up the plot for The Darkness sequel in a minute.
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Just one more thing before i start a new chapter tomorrow.I got one of the perfect theme songs for this fanfic.It's called THE NIGHT BY DISTURBED.Here's why i think so.

"IN A WORLD BEYOND BEYOND CONTROLLING
ARE YOU GOING TO DENY THE SAVOIR IN FRONT OF YOUR EYES
GIVE IN TO THE NIGHT

POWER BEYOND CONTAINING
ARE GOING TO REMAIN A SLAVE FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE
STAR INTO THE NIGHT."

Cause Dark Sonic's power is uncontrollable.Mephiles wants to help Sonic save Amy's life.And Sonic is Mephiles' new servant or slave to do his dirty work.
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Sep 7 2008, 04:45 PM
Just one more thing before i start a new chapter tomorrow.I got one of the perfect theme songs for this fanfic.It's called THE NIGHT BY DISTURBED.Here's why i think so.

"IN A WORLD BEYOND BEYOND CONTROLLING
ARE YOU GOING TO DENY THE SAVOIR IN FRONT OF YOUR EYES
GIVE IN TO THE NIGHT

POWER BEYOND CONTAINING
ARE GOING TO REMAIN A SLAVE FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE
STAR INTO THE NIGHT."

Cause Dark Sonic's power is uncontrollable.Mephiles wants to help Sonic save Amy's life.And Sonic is Mephiles' new servant or slave to do his dirty work.
Sounds good to me. If you need another title I guess, um, I don't know. Darkest Hour sounds good to me. But so do many of the others...
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CHAPTER 8:THE MOVE ON AND A NEW LEGIONARRE. Posted Image

The sun was rising up.

"All right,soldiers!Let's move out!"Nomak commanded.They all walked down a muddy path cause the rain last night.Poison ivy was everywhere and mosquitos were pissing off the soldiers.That's because they were close to a swamp.In that swamp,there were prehistoric monsters that feed on carcasses of dead animals.Espio stops for a minute.

"What is it,Espio?"Vector asks.

"I think we're being followed."Espio looks around cautiously.

"You damn right,you're bring followed.By me!"Dark Sonic appears out of nowhere.

"SONIC!"Shadow shouts.

"I brought a few minors to do my bidding."Dark Sonic chants that ancient text again.

"Here we go again!"Charmy gets scared.The killgak appear from the ground and attack.
The soldiers were gonna attack back,till suddenly a loud drumming noise shook the ground.

"Aaaahh!THAT NOISE!IT HURTS MY EARS!!!"Dark Sonic covers his ears.The legion was screaming cause the drumming was so loud,it could make you go nuts.

"Wait,that drumming is drummed by only one person."Sonia says in her mind.Suddenly a green hedgehog with rockstar hair and a red vest came out and attacked the killgak with two drumsticks with lasers.

"What's the 411?Evil afoot?"The green hedgehog says.

"MANIC?IS THAT YOU?!"Sonia was excited to see her twin brother.

"In the fur!"Manic was excited to see her sister.Sonia runs to him and hugs him.

"What's up,big bro!I like the costume.Is it for Halloween or something?"Manic smart talks.

"Manic?How dare you interfere?!"Dark Sonic gets mad.

"Oh,how rude!Here i am to come all this way to see my two sibling and you say,'Manic?!How dare you interere?!'.Man,have the chili dogs messed up your brain,Sonic.You could never let go of those things."Manic says with his arms crossed.

"Grrrrrr!!!JUST SHUT UP AND DIE!!"Dark Sonic shoots a laser from his finger.Manic dodges every shot.

"Slow your roll,man!I'm just playin' with ya.Besides,you were always the sucky shooter."Manic taunts him.

"*growls*SHUT UP,DAMN YOU!!!"Dark Sonic shoots rapid fire lasers.Manic uses his drumsticks and spins them really fast to make a deflector shields.

"Looks like someone's gonna go brain dead with anger."Manic taunts him again.

"HOW 'BOUT I MAKE YOU DEAD?!!!"Dark Sonic charges at him.Manic uses his drums to make a powerful shockwave.

"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!I HATE THAT NOISE!!!!"Dark Sonic goes nuts.

"ROCK ON!!!"Manic drums faster.He then stops after.Dark Sonic falls to the ground,panting and annoyed.

"You may have won this round,little brother.But mark my words,you will pay for your insolence!"Dark Sonic promises.

"Hold on and let me get a piece of paper and a pencil to mark your words.And how much do i have to pay for my insolence?Cause i only have 56 bucks."Manic taunts him again.

"GAAAAH!"Dark Sonic flys away.

"Thank you,thank you.I know.I rule."Manic congragulates himself.

"That was amazing,Manic.How'd you learn to drum that fast?"Sonia was both amazed and impressed with her brother's performance.

"I learned it all from Joey Jordison of the band Slipknot.Whoo,is that guy a fast drummer."Manic takes a breath.

"So,what are you doing here,anyway?"Sonia asks.

"I heard Eggman returned and asked the legion chiefs where you went.So that's when i was searching.And what's with Sonic?He's kind of evil."Manic explains and asks.

"We don't know yet.But whatever's causing it,we hope to find out."Sonia says.

"And the chiefs told me you guys were going to the Black Isle of Synerate,right?"Manic wonders.

"Yeah.Wanna come.We could use all the help we could get."Sonia asks.

"Sure.Anything for my adorable little sister.And besides,i wanna help solve Sonic's little bad boy problem too."Manic agrees.

"Sweet."Sonia was really glad Manic joined them as she smiled with appreciation.They moved on to the next stop.The Ice Valley of Berg.The temperatures there are blistering cold at approximately 24 degrees ferinheight.But,who knows what evil lies beneath the ice?Find in CHAPTER 9:COLD FIGHT.
Edited by Thrash, Sep 8 2008, 12:56 PM.
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Ok,i changed to THE DARKNESS WITHIN:DARK ARMAGEDDON!I think that's better than what it used to be.I hope Miracle likes it.
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