Round 1 - Neo/TUC vs Team KB

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Round 1 - Neo/TUC vs Team KB; Neo & TUC, Ktimleck & Brennan
Topic Started: Jul 4 2008, 09:27 AM (388 Views)
~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jul 8 2008, 07:27 AM Post #21
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Banned Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007 Gender: Male Favorite System: Wii I'm Browsing With: Internet Explorer 7 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Adventure	The Spinner Ball was still in the air, right above dark. Dark leaped up. Dark was now in the Spinner Ball. The ball turned blood red. Dark began to grow. Finally the ball was inside him! "Hahahahahahaha, I am now Burger Dark! Hehe!" Dark was as fat as half the stadium! "Ram into me and you'll be bounced back! The Spinner Ball's inside of me! Now you can't hurt my stomach, but that's pretty much the biggest thing showing!" Dark sounded more and more like an idiot...



Timothy Ulysses, Crusader	Jul 9 2008, 03:27 AM Post #22
OMG! Eggman is the Fat Controller! Posts: 1,739 Group: =SB= Governors Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox I'm Browsing With: Internet Explorer 7 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Battle Current Mood: GOOD RP'S DAMMIT! Playstation Network ID: Lamp oil, rope, BOMBS. Xbox Live Gamertag: You want it? Wii Friend Code: I want your rupees.	Ysaro frowned; obese pantomiming echidnas? This was DEFINITELY not mentioned in the contract... Nevertheless, he continued with his charge, changing his tactics at the last second. At that weight, surely NOTHING could make it far off the ground... if I leap through his head, he won't be able to do a thing about it... And that's just what he did. Aiming for Dark's head and neck, he launched himself upwards, his strength-sapping phasing at full power.
	"I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the breadth of the land reducing all he touched to rubble..." Spoiler: click to toggle Pearls of wisdom (Currently looking for quotes that AREN'T mine): Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader So, let's recap; Shadow's ring bracers aren't just some peculiar and incredibly dubious fashion statement; they are in fact devices (whether they be magical, mystical or technological in nature) used to contain his godmodded powers to a more bareable level that remains safely under nine thousand. They are also used to hide his emorific wrists. Am I following this properly so far? Spoiler: click to toggle SuperShadowgal If you do not use proper grammar, Lady Fury shall kick your a$$! Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader According to the Laws of Awesomeness, if the need is dire and the circumstances call for it, Amy automatically trumps all other characters. Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader Amy Rose without a doubt; how can you not love Spontaneous Hammer Generation and Extraordinary Rage as powers? She owns many robots with her super pwning hammer. I think her problem is that if caught by surprise, she automatically drops her hammer, no Dexterity roll required (in case you're wondering, that was possibly another one of my epically failing jokes). Besides, to REALLY start beating things up, she needs to be 'in the zone'. The trigger seems to vary from time to time, from "Don't interrupt me while talking to Sonic," and "I'm pissed because I can't find Sonic," to "So-and-so insulted me," and "It's that time of the month again." Plus she's like Mr T in that due to the Law of Sheer Awesomeness, she can beat the crap out of anyone she wishes (downing an Egg Fort singlehandedly is a prime example of her awesome factor). It's a shame she can't pity foo's; then she'd be the epitomy of destruction. Thumbs up to the day Lady Fury learns Pity Foo'. Spoiler: click to toggle Um... help? Spoiler: click to toggle Wowzaa1 Banned because I LOVE YOU. Timothy Ulysses Crusader BANNED: For... wait, WHAT? Spoiler: click to toggle sMy PANCAKES Remember kids... naplam is used on OTHER people. NOT yourself. Spoiler: click to toggle Quote: Bones of Terror: Good, now Timothy have some company when he is online. Rouge X Darkness: About time. Shadow's missing his blades TUC, time to give them back <3 Timothy Ulysses, Crusader: What's that supposed to mean exactly? Rouge X Darkness: It means you can stop being an emo about being the only person from Down Under on here My fancharacters and my highly acclaimed Master Codex of Superpowers! ___________________ Artwork by Sniper, gif by sMy PANCAKES. Yes, ALL of my characters wield or have been influenced by magic or magical items. So? Spoiler: click to toggle Friends: sonicblaze, wowzaa1, DragonFlame, Beta Ray Banhammer, sMy PANCAKES, Miracle, FireFly, Talancir, ??? Please note that I won't add you without your asking first (because I'm paranoid or shy, one of the two). PRE-EMPTIVE ANSWER ALERT! No, I do not have instant messaging. But I do have Facebook! PM me for details. For the last time, YES, I hate Shadow!


~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jul 9 2008, 06:53 AM Post #23
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Banned Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007 Gender: Male Favorite System: Wii I'm Browsing With: Internet Explorer 7 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Adventure	"Gee!" Dark fell to the ground. Suddenly Dark spitup the Spinner ball. He got back up, skinny again. "I need some water." Dark said. Dark took water from his coat pocket, and drank it all. "Okay, I'm ready again." Dark said, Dark had completely forgotten about his guitar. "Oh, heh." Dark took his guitar out and played "The Song of the Sword", which was only about 15 seconds. The guitar become a large and powerful sword. "YinYang... SWORDSLASH TIMES FOUR!" Dark yelled charging his sword as he ran towards Ysaro. Dark slashed 50 slashes at Ysaro, leading upto a big bang. The sword became larger, and Dark made a final slash. Dark stood back on the ground. "So sorry, I just... really want that prize! Today's the day you almost caught Yin and Dark." Dark smiled, wondering in his head if Ysaro will fight more. Edited by Brennen the Vampire, Jul 9 2008, 07:57 AM.



Timothy Ulysses, Crusader	Jul 11 2008, 12:02 AM Post #24
OMG! Eggman is the Fat Controller! Posts: 1,739 Group: =SB= Governors Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox I'm Browsing With: Internet Explorer 7 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Battle Current Mood: GOOD RP'S DAMMIT! Playstation Network ID: Lamp oil, rope, BOMBS. Xbox Live Gamertag: You want it? Wii Friend Code: I want your rupees.	Ysaro skidded to a halt; having blocked most of the attacks and receiving several cuts and gashes from those he failed to deflect, he had blocked the final strike, only to be send sliding backwards from the kinetic force behind the assault. "Impressive," he grunted, "I guess I've underestimated your ability with a blade. But don't get too cocky, youngster, I've barely even started." He unhooked the sword sheath from his belt and held it in a back-wield position in his left hand. Dual-wielding both his katana and the scabbard, he entered a defensive stance. If the boy wanted to play Offensive, then let him; he'd just end up on his back faster...
	"I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the breadth of the land reducing all he touched to rubble..." Spoiler: click to toggle Pearls of wisdom (Currently looking for quotes that AREN'T mine): Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader So, let's recap; Shadow's ring bracers aren't just some peculiar and incredibly dubious fashion statement; they are in fact devices (whether they be magical, mystical or technological in nature) used to contain his godmodded powers to a more bareable level that remains safely under nine thousand. They are also used to hide his emorific wrists. Am I following this properly so far? Spoiler: click to toggle SuperShadowgal If you do not use proper grammar, Lady Fury shall kick your a$$! Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader According to the Laws of Awesomeness, if the need is dire and the circumstances call for it, Amy automatically trumps all other characters. Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader Amy Rose without a doubt; how can you not love Spontaneous Hammer Generation and Extraordinary Rage as powers? She owns many robots with her super pwning hammer. I think her problem is that if caught by surprise, she automatically drops her hammer, no Dexterity roll required (in case you're wondering, that was possibly another one of my epically failing jokes). Besides, to REALLY start beating things up, she needs to be 'in the zone'. The trigger seems to vary from time to time, from "Don't interrupt me while talking to Sonic," and "I'm pissed because I can't find Sonic," to "So-and-so insulted me," and "It's that time of the month again." Plus she's like Mr T in that due to the Law of Sheer Awesomeness, she can beat the crap out of anyone she wishes (downing an Egg Fort singlehandedly is a prime example of her awesome factor). It's a shame she can't pity foo's; then she'd be the epitomy of destruction. Thumbs up to the day Lady Fury learns Pity Foo'. Spoiler: click to toggle Um... help? Spoiler: click to toggle Wowzaa1 Banned because I LOVE YOU. Timothy Ulysses Crusader BANNED: For... wait, WHAT? Spoiler: click to toggle sMy PANCAKES Remember kids... naplam is used on OTHER people. NOT yourself. Spoiler: click to toggle Quote: Bones of Terror: Good, now Timothy have some company when he is online. Rouge X Darkness: About time. Shadow's missing his blades TUC, time to give them back <3 Timothy Ulysses, Crusader: What's that supposed to mean exactly? Rouge X Darkness: It means you can stop being an emo about being the only person from Down Under on here My fancharacters and my highly acclaimed Master Codex of Superpowers! ___________________ Artwork by Sniper, gif by sMy PANCAKES. Yes, ALL of my characters wield or have been influenced by magic or magical items. So? Spoiler: click to toggle Friends: sonicblaze, wowzaa1, DragonFlame, Beta Ray Banhammer, sMy PANCAKES, Miracle, FireFly, Talancir, ??? Please note that I won't add you without your asking first (because I'm paranoid or shy, one of the two). PRE-EMPTIVE ANSWER ALERT! No, I do not have instant messaging. But I do have Facebook! PM me for details. For the last time, YES, I hate Shadow!


~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jul 11 2008, 07:05 AM Post #25
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Banned Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007 Gender: Male Favorite System: Wii I'm Browsing With: Internet Explorer 7 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Adventure	Dark saw Ysaro in the stance. The sword became a guitar again. Dark smiled. "I'm not going to move, you attack me. Give me your best, make me angry." Dark said still smiling.



DragonFlame	Jul 14 2008, 12:32 PM Post #26
Beware of my Treasure Posts: 11,572 Group: =SB= Kings Member #348 Joined: December 9, 2006 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox 360 I'm Browsing With: FireFox 3 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic & Knuckles	The Dragon wishes to speak on the concern of the battle between Neo/TUC and Team KB ------------------------------------ Neo Fair Play. Use of simple swung sword. Leaving opponent with a chance to create the fate. Taken hit, before charging throwing his sword. This time it seem to hit his opponent before grabbing the sword. Shame on you. You should have let Relik choose the fate. Dodging the move, while creating another move what i lean towards godlike usage. Shame on you, never create an attack without the member choosing it's fate. Taken hit like Relik's weapon would be intended. Yet, creating a counter attack simple adding what occurs as he impales the warrior in the chest. This is the third time i see creating an attack of your own. Double shame on you. 3.5/10 Grammar. Some minor spellings, nothing to vaguer upon. While the description of the battle could have stand out even better. 8/10 Adapting To Surroundings. It's about the average that could have been used with more care. Not much else to add. 7/10 Entertainment Value. Leaving the crowds go crazy with one most outstanding intro. Learning the rival's move for the positive value. Hmm, you create flaws that no one is perfect when time is critical. More tense drama. Always a pleasure watching injuries and not only dodge every single move. Hmm this would have been rather iffy if both rivals would fall at the same time. 9.5/10 TUC Fair Play. Taken hit, while nothing serious by the might wouldn't necessary have nothing to much of wagering. Preparing attack, while nothing attended, even if the chance could be there. First real attempt to strike your rival. Leaving Dark to choose it's fate. If things seem reasonable the attack might connect with it's huge size and from what i could see clumsiness. Taken several hits yet minor. It sounds like normal lifetime in battle. 8/10 Grammar. grammar it self haven't much flaws, but the amount of detailedness could have been worked on. 9/10 Adapting To Surroundings. Good use, but only the intro showed an real impression onto me. 7.5/10 Entertainment Value. With an late entrance with slight use of anger forced this into what you could call. Looking forwards to see his actions rather then words. More talk then action almost waiting for the battle to start. Hmm, where is the thrill in that. This wouldn't be the known comedy Rachel in action, and well actually i hoped for a laugh or two. 8/10 -----------------------Total Score 28 + 32.5 = 60.5------------------------------- Ktimleck Fair Play. Dodged, while using counter as your second move. Use of shin kick as a surprise element. Leaving foe determine the attacks course. Taken hit, serious wound, creating your own version of Light's attack, but due to the way. You managed to ignore the fact he caught the sword after it hit you. Using another attack, leaving your rival once more the chance to counter or dodge. Ignored the fact he slashed you in the back. Taking action of impaling your rival turned into slashing his shoulder. But wouldn't that say you created the event. Shame on you. 6/10 Grammar. Little spelling errors, but also nothing to over exaggerating about the usage of describing the moment's even better could been used better. 8.5/10 Adapting To Surroundings. About average. Yet there wasn't much from the arena it self occurring like shifting winds etc, but there wasn't all that much use of the physical appearance of the world and warriors in all. 7.5/10 Entertainment Value. The intro worth a golden star. Yet it doesn't affect the total. The drama is always appealing to leave me interested and thrilled of how the battle turning of any events. Quite the melodramatic action it's almost as if the moment is taken from a movie. Great work. First time use of team spirit. Using the crowds as the center. 9.5/10 Brennan Fair Play. First usage of an attack. What could be in fact stand as a surprise element. Caused by using the background and only the hands controlling it's fate. Creating some kind of counter or dodge move by using the ball towards his advantage. Eh! I don't know what that was aether an hit or dodge. Using the time to create another attack. But from what i hear, sounds like a crazy idea. And also mentioned the last hit. Would that be necessary. 7/10 Grammar. All in all. Pretty good performance just a few spelling error and could have used more description involving the crowds, other aspects easily you could have figured out. 8/10 Adapting To Surroundings. I don't see much promise on the surroundings it self. Only the characters them self involved. You should have used more time on the arena it self. 4.5/10 Entertainment Value. Hmm so using the time to admire or focus most on your rival. But what about the crowds, would they be left out in the midst. Reminds me of the Chinese in Serious Sam 2. Gracie for memory involvement. I find the battle from Dark's side, a bit boring and never changed into the exciting and thrilling part's that Relik created. Other then that, not to much use of team spirit. Won't affect to much the total. 6.5/10 -------------------------Total Score 31.5 + 26 = 57,5------------------------------- The dragon have spoken. The overall scores ended with. 60.5 versus 57.5 May your fate lie on the other judges hands from now on.
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Spin	Jul 17 2008, 07:56 PM Post #27
A magician never reveals his secrets! Posts: 4,183 Group: =SB= Governors Member #1,038 Joined: May 13, 2007 Gender: Male Favorite System: Wii I'm Browsing With: FireFox 3 Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic 3 & Knuckles Current Mood: Swamped	Well, given recent events, there could be a winner that only has one member left on this board. Anyway, let's start, shall we? Neo and TUC NEO Fair Play: When you threw the sword, it hit your opponent and then you got it back, all in one post. Not good for this category. And that wasn't the only time you forced a hit. Not a very good job in this category, in my opinion. 3/10 Grammar: Nothing TOO hard to read, but punctuation was a slight issue in my opinion. 7.5/10 Adapting to Surroundings: You did mention the surroundings, but you didn't really say how it impacted your character. Nothing impressive, but still okay. 7/10 Entertainment Value: Great opening in my opinion. You kept my interest throughout the fight, and there were injuries to add drama to the fight. Pretty good. 9/10 TUC Fair Play: Took your hits but they didn't affect your ability to fight all that badly. Didn't force Dark to take the attack either, so a good job in my book. 8.5/10 Grammar: Your grammar was really good, just that your posts were so short. There really wasn't anything too . 9/10 Adapting to Surroundings: Nothing really, outside of the intro, where there was a mention of the surroundings and it's impact. 7/10 Entertainment Value: You really excelled in this in the last tournament, with Rachel and the guards. Not as good this time, but you still kept my interest in the fight. 7/10 Total: 58 TEAM KB Ktimleck Fair Play: Dodged and countered the first attack, but didn't see that the sword went back to the original thrower. You got hit in the back but didn't have it impact you at all, and then still forced a hit on your opponent. 5/10 Grammar: Again, nothing too awful, but there were some small errors. 8.5/10 Adapting to Surroundings: You didn't really mention the crowd or the arena, you basically just focused on your opponent. 6/10 Entertainment Value: Intro was very good, and you did a really good job of adding drama to the fight as well. The crowd got involved to a good extent as well. Great job overall here. 9/10 Brennan Fair Play: Used a surprise element in your first attack, and didn't force as to whether it hit your opponent or not. However, you used some odd schemes in your other posts, really. Nothing awful here. 7.5/10 Grammar: There really weren't any numerous errors, it's just that your sentences were pretty darn short in my opinion. More description would've helped here. 6/10 Adapting to Surroundings: You basically just focused on you and your opponent, and nothing about the surroundings. 4/10 Entertainment Value: Okay, I'll admit, those strange tactics involving the Spinner Ball did make me raise an eyebrow. =P There just... wasn't anything too interesting outside of that really. Not bad, but not great either. 7/10 Total: 53 AFTER TWO JUDGES, THE SCORE STANDS AT 118.5-110.5 IN FAVOR OF NEO AND TUC.
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