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Dominican Stats	Jun 17 2008, 07:38 AM Post #1
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	OK you people, I may know how to RP in writing more than many of you but there is one thing that I think I suck at for some odd reason which is making comics. So I thought about making one, and so I did which turned out like this... http://s141.photobucket.com/albums/r71/Master_Lloyd/?action=view&current=001.png So I want to hear what others have to say about this, oh and can I use effects, if I can may someone please send me the link where you get them because I want to use it for the battles, I can't let it be all pain, right? :3 So yeah... COMMENTS.
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jun 17 2008, 07:57 AM Post #2
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Continue? Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007	Download GIMP for effects. I can't see the comic, sorry.



Dominican Stats	Jun 17 2008, 08:29 AM Post #3
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	Where is this download at, may I have the link to it because i do not know where it is located at xD
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


Skippy	Jun 17 2008, 08:45 AM Post #4
L'chiam! Posts: 5,866 Group: B Rank Legend Member #2,630 Joined: September 30, 2007	-Need to space pannels more -need speach bubbles. -3rd and 4th pannel are missing the other characters. -Try to use zooming effects, especially on fight scenes.



Dominican Stats	Jun 17 2008, 08:50 AM Post #5
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	- how can you make speach bubbles. - where is the link to get the efftects. - when you say "space pannels more" Do you mean keep them more spread out? xD
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jun 17 2008, 09:26 AM Post #6
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Continue? Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007	Grabbing Link Will edit when done. EDIT: Done. lol http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GIMP It should have some links to downloads there. Edited by Brennen the Vampire, Jun 17 2008, 09:29 AM.



Sakul	Jun 17 2008, 09:27 AM Post #7
=SB= [Resident Lurker] Posts: 779 Group: E Rank Hero Member #1,259 Joined: June 6, 2007 Steam ID: Sakul67	There was no division between the panels of the comic, just add a black line between them. Speech bubbles are easy, draw a circle or a square, fill it in with white, then place the text in it. Don't forget to add a "tail." A tail is a little section the points at whomever is speaking. Or you could add a smaller copy of the speaker's head inside or next to the bubble. (The highest bubble goes first, lowest goes last.) What Skip means by "Zooming effects." Is just zoom in a bit. Increase the size of the image without expanding the panel it fits in, while focusing on the action.



Skippy	Jun 17 2008, 09:38 AM Post #8
L'chiam! Posts: 5,866 Group: B Rank Legend Member #2,630 Joined: September 30, 2007	Chaos Shadow Jun 17 2008, 08:50 AM - how can you make speach bubbles. - where is the link to get the efftects. - when you say "space pannels more" Do you mean keep them more spread out? xD -effect on paint program. Bottom left selection. -on paint. Image>Stretch/Skew -Yes



Dominican Stats	Jun 17 2008, 10:34 AM Post #9
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	I already got GIMP and I just got confused about it there are so many things that got me lost and I have no time to try and study how to use it, so can I just add effects like fire balls, and such on paint? and also will it still look good if I do that, I need some opinions >.<
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jun 17 2008, 10:55 AM Post #10
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Continue? Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007	Look up some GIMP tuts.



Dominican Stats	Jun 18 2008, 07:01 AM Post #11
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	Me did another one =D http://s141.photobucket.com/albums/r71/Master_Lloyd/?action=view&current=1.jpg A little more impovement on the last one that I did, I know you can see a few words that I wrote there but basicaly Pathom is trying to kill Escudo for a reason which I cannot tell you yet, but you all get the point, right? ^^:: Oh and also I added some tools, and played with them for a while, might use more later, but yeah anyway I need comments, if I get good enough I can start adding characters in here ^^
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


Lord DragonFlame	Jun 18 2008, 10:42 AM Post #12
Christmas is back again Posts: 17,411 Group: Former Monarchs Member #348 Joined: December 9, 2006 Gender: Male Steam ID: Warzak85DF	Actually by looking through your first comic it seems. The first issue would be better since i was able to read everything and it looked promising. The second would be hard to read. Maybe use only white text. Or use white speach bubbles and maybe larger space pannels. So you wont feel that it will be replaced with just countless with speach. Else for being your first comic. It is good. But i prefer the first issue. The second was to hard reading.
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Skippy	Jun 18 2008, 10:50 AM Post #13
L'chiam! Posts: 5,866 Group: B Rank Legend Member #2,630 Joined: September 30, 2007	ok the speach bubbles are Still messed up you have to have this highlighted in paint: http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s274/StuperEagle12/untitled.png



~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jun 18 2008, 10:52 AM Post #14
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Continue? Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007	Yup, he said "fill it in with white and then type text in the bubble." It make's no sense to make a bubble without the filling. Well, in real life it makes sense but you get it.



Dominican Stats	Jun 18 2008, 04:58 PM Post #15
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	OK I dicded that it will be better to just keep it in a color that is able to be seen because that thing that i was doing above was just ungly D: So yeah... I guess I ended that battle, oh and this might give you a few comic people to see how Sombra is when he is on battle.
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


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