Ohshi-Kappy made a character! D:

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Ohshi-Kappy made a character! D:; Hyper the Hedgehog
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KAPPY	Jun 15 2008, 02:20 PM Post #1
Carnival Night Act 1 Posts: 175 Group: E Rank Guardian Member #9,066 Joined: June 14, 2008	Lulz, I made a fan character. I had this little guy since like I was 5 or something, almost ten years ago. Anyway, here's Hyper's profile. Oh and just to let everybody know, Rabid Panda's Newton and Zeonark Naro's Zeonark from STF are not mine! >: ____________________________________________________________________________ Original Name: Zack Light Nickname: Hyper or the Warrior of Light Species: Hedgehog Gender: Male Age: 16 Birth Date: August 24, 1992 Birth Place: Arthias Residence: Skyler Height: 4'2" Weight: 96 lbs Occupation: Usually out on an adventure, saving the world from darkness or competing in fighting tournaments Abilities: Light and Lightning Attacks: Lightning Bolt- A lightning bolt comes out anywhere Hyper wants it to come out and is usually his most common move that he uses on his opponents but it's sadly his weakest move but it has a better chance paralyzing opponents. Electric Body- Hyper can turn himself into electricity and can let Hyper travel in electrical objects and do whatever he wants with them. And because of this, physical attacks don't usually work on him. Hyper's favorite move. Another thing is can do it can also make his fur glow. Electric Force Field- A force field made out of electricity defends Hyper within 10 feet and shocks the who ever touches it. It's Hyper's only real defensive move. Electric Tornado- Hyper can spin himself really fast and unleash lightning at the same time, creating a tornado. Hyper can make it big enough to destroy a city or small as a regular sized adult. Hyper uses this move to usually defeat enemies that can fly. Thunderquake- Hyper digs into the ground with his hands and can unleash large amounts of electricity through the ground. It homes in on its enemies and destroys anything in its path. The only way to make it stop is by attacking its target. Hyper uses this move to defeat his enemies underground. Electrical Copies- Hyper can make electrical copies of himself and is able to create holograms like clones. He isn't able to create real clones however. Hyper uses this move to either retreat from his enemies or let the enemies tire themselves up then the real Hyper goes in for the kill Electric Bomb- A strong attack from Hyper but this move can do two different things. First, Hyper has lightning comes out of his hands and it starts making a levitating orb of electricity which glows a yellow color. Then Hyper launches it at his opponent and he gets paralyzed and hurt from the strong attack. However, the Electric Bomb also does something else. First, Hyper makes it like how he always does, making an levitating yellow orb of electricity floating between his hands and then he launches it a short distance in front of him. Then after five seconds, lightning comes out of the orb in different directions and it's not as powerful as the other Electric Bomb attack but this way of using the Electric Bomb is used to strike a lot of opponents but is not as strong as the other way which usually targets one person. A very unique attack that Hyper made. Orb of Light- Hyper creates a gigantic orb of yellow light that is twice his size. The orb does devastating damage to his enemies and if somebody tries to hit it, it splits into twelve arrows covered in light and homes in on its target. This attack never misses and usually kills the person it seeks. This is one of Hyper's strongest attack but is uses nearly all of his light energy. Beam of the Light Goddess-Hyper's strongest attack and it can only be used when Hyper is in his Light Form. When used, Hyper charges up a beam and when it's fully charged, Hyper unleashes it at his opponent and it's GIGANTIC! It can engulf a giant very easily. This attack usually kills his opponent and was never stopped before. However, this uses ALL of Hyper's light energy and puts him back into his normal form. The beam is very destructive and powerful and can instantly kill a person and not to mention they have no chance of surviving if the attack hits him. Super Hyper- Not really an offensive move nor a defensive move but more like a power up move for Hyper. If he has large amounts of electricity, Hyper can change into his Super Form where his fur glows to a brighter color of silver and his eye color changes to a cyan color. His clothes change into a dark silver color but besides all the color changes, his moves are powered up and his Lightning Bolt can be nearly strong at the Orb of Light. However, this attack requires electricity and when it runs out, Hyper turns back to normal and half all of his electricity and energy are drained away from him, leaving him highly vunerable to attacks. All of his attacks change into a silver color. The attack upgrade his electric powers and Hyper is very powerful but is the weakest out of the three forms. Dark Hyper- This is like Super Hyper but instead, it's even more powerful and it increases the dark energy in Hyper. It also turns all of Hyper's attacks into a dark, evil version. His eye color turns red and his fur turns purple. The cyan marks on his quills turn black so does all of his clothes. Instead of light energy, his electricity is fused with dark energy and all of his attacks are darkified. Hyper uses it as a last resort if his life depended on it and if his Super Form doesn't finish the job. But Hyper can't control the Dark Form and he often goes out of control, attacking his friends or people that was with him. Dark Hyper however doesn't last as long as Super Hyper but it drains Hyper's electricity and energy and to make things worst, his dark energy increases. All of his attacks also changes into a purple color. Hyper tries to avoid using this attack but depending on the situation, he has no choice. Light Hyper-The strongest form of all. His Light energy and electricity fuse together and all of Hyper's clothes change into a sparkling golden color. His fur flashes to a lot of different colors really fast and his powers are killers when he uses them in this form. However, it is very hard to use and Hyper is pretty much left vunerable after he uses this because it drains 3/4 of his electricity when time is up. But he can run faster then lightning and his weakest attacks are stronger then his strongest normal attacks in his normal form and his strongest attacks are pretty much instant death for his enemies. Light Hyper can last longer then Super or Dark Hyper and is more powerful then any of his other forms. Weapons: A Lightning Sword that is shaped like a lightning bolt for the top and is known to send thousands of volts into a person's body. Talents: Is a fast runner and can juggle up to four small objects at a time. Hobbies: Fights in tournaments, watches TV, plays video games, or goes to parties Weaknesses: Dirt being on him, getting buried alive, and earth/ground powers Personal Facts: Is known to accidently make electrical objects explode, once destroyed a city when he was once drunk, accidently destroyed a house, and dreams about the oddest stuff. Dominant Hand: Right handed Allergies: Is allergic to bees which is why Hyper usually runs away from them. Friends: Newton the Panda, Zeonark Naro the Hedgehog, Blackova the Panther, and Mercury the Hedgehog. Rivals: Zeonark and Skylark Enemies: Darkinga the Dark Lord, Kaburaisu the Sky Blue Dragon, and Lord Azuron the Hedgehog Relatives: Unknown Favorite activities: His hobbies, sports, and flying Least Favorite Activities: Shopping, school, going on adventures that he is forced to do, doing girly things, and quests. Fears: When Hyper's friends are in danger and Hyper is unable to save them in time. Goal: To defeat the darkness and restore the balance between the light and dark Social Class: Is popular and can make friends with people just like that Economic Class: Is rich because all the money Lighter owned before his death is now Hyper's. Alignment: Good IQ: 98 Gourmet: Pizza Beverage: Coke Favorite Color: Yellow Catch Phrase: "I feel lazy today" Personality: Is usually hyper but can be very emotional. Somtimes act like a little child and he is known to go berserk on people when he is angry. He acts nice towards his friends and family which is only Lighter and is usually competetive toward his rivals. He is annoyed when he sees his enemies and despite his dreadful history, Hyper is still the same and he kept his promise to Lighter. He forgives people with an apology with no problem and he doesn't really know how to feel about the strangers in the city but he treats them nicely. Hyper is still hyper and nothing changed him. Fur Color: Yellow and Cyan Eye Color: Dark blue Quill Style: Shadow style quills with cyan marks on them Nose: Regular black hedgehog nose Ears: A bit pointy but normal Tail: Is a tiny bit bigger then a normal size tail Shirt: An open white vest with a hood attached to it and a yellow lightning symbol on the back of it. Pants: Dark blue jeans with holes on the knees Shoes: White Vans with white laces. Gloves: Clean white gloves with crystal cuplets attached to the top side. Accessories: Wears a golden necklace with a golden lightning object attached to it. Vehinicle: A hover board that's yellow and black and when he races around on it, it leaves a bright yellow trail. Theme Song: Rockstar by Nickelback(sp?) History: Zack Light was born in August 24, 1991 but he never knew why but he was put in a adoption center not long after his birth. For five years, he lived in the adoption center until he had enough of the adoption center life. He snuck out during a thunderstorm and walked into the forest, forgetting about being under a tree is the worst place to be during a thunderstorm. He stayed under a tree for a while until Zack realized that he is in the worst place possible for a thunderstorm. Zack tried to escape the forest but ended going deeper in it. He could also hear police officers nearby with their sirens. Zack was soon in a treeless spot in the forest and has no clue where to go. By the time he decided where to go, it was too late. A lightning bolt struck Zack and he fell to the floor and is outcold. When Zack opened his eyes, he gasped at the scene he is in. The sky is a gold color with clouds in the distance with lightning in them. He is standing on a transparent floor somehow and a yellow bright orb is in front of him, about the size of his head. Zack heard him spoke something. If you wish to live, accept the powers of light and protect the world from darkness, said the voice. Zack had no clue what it was talking about and doesn't really want to do it, especially since he is threatened to do it. But he had no choice. He nodded his head and he didn't hear a reply or anything from the orb. But all the sudden, a lightning bolt with all the colors of the rainbow in it struck Zack and once again, he fell to the floor and is outcold again. The floor under him disappeared and everything turned into a shade of black. Zack fell down a endless black pit until he opened his eyes. Zack woke up and discovered he is back in the forest with the thunderstorm gone. He gasped when he looked at his fur. His fur color changed from cyan to yellow. His former yellow marks on his quills are now cyan while the rest of his fur is now yellow. But right now isn't the time to worry about his fur, he knew he is wide open from police so he tried to escape into the forest but police cars suddenly accelarated and surrounded him from all sides. The police officers ran out of the car and grabbed Zack. Zack didn't bother try to escape. He is surrounded and chances are even if he does, they'll find him again not far from the scene. One police officer threw him into the car and went into the front seat. Zack heard him say that his fur is shocky. The next day he is back at the adoption center and what happened last night went on the town newspaper. A wealthy and rich hedgehog named Kaiyo Haikomo came and agreed to adopt Zack. Zack knew he only adopted him because of what happened last night but he didn't care. He just wanted to leave the adoption center he was in for five years. He agreed to go with him and Zack packed up his stuff and after five years, he finally left the adoption center. Zack arrived at his new home in Arthias, an old century town in Mobious. Zack discovered he and his new father is in a mansion. It might be look like old centuried but it is still magnificent. After Zack settled in his new house, his father sent him to a private school for rich children where Zack learned new stuff that he never heard before. He also ate new food and drank new drinks that he never had at the adoption center. His favorite food is Pizza and favorite drink is Coke. Zack discovered his father worked owns a large company that creates video game. Zack played some of the games his father created and loved it. A year later while on a father and son trip to the floating city of Skyler, Zack met his first real friend known as Skylark the Wind Hedgehog. He can control the wind and make tornados. They both played video games together and got to know each other before they left Skyler. Before Zack left, Skylark said this to him,"you are one hyper hedgehog! Do you mind if I call you Hyper from now on?" Zack nodded and that is when his new nickname started. Eventually his friends at his private school knew his nickname and now everybody in Arthias calls him that. Eventually, nobody called him Zack anymore. For three years, nothing interesting happened till his birthday. Hyper as nine when his greatest enemy showed up. It started when Hyper rushed out of bed and went to his dad's room. He usually gets him good presents since he is a rich man. But when he opened the door, he gasped at the scene. Hyper saw his father dead in a pool of blood on the floor. Nearby is a dark purple hedgehog with his fists covered in dark energy. "Hmm, I detected large amounts of light energy from this house but it's not coming from him. Child, does anybody else live in this house?" the hedgehog asked. Hyper didn't answer. Instead, he swore with anger at the hedgehog. The hedgehog was surprised that he knew such language at a young age. He turned around to make him stop swearing but his eyes widened when he looked at him. Large amounts of light energy is inside of him and the hedgehog is shocked when he discovered he has such a large amount of energy at a young age. He thought to himself, it must be someone else. "You have such a big mouth, child. My name is Darkinga if you wish to know and if you want to kill me someday, I suggest you use your light energy usefully. For now, farewell. I have no more business here for now," said the hedgehog known as Darkinga. Black flames suddenly engulfed him and he disappeared and Hyper didn't notice anything fire on the ground. Hyper wondered what he ment but he will remember his name and swear to kill Darkinga someday. But for now, he called the police about his dad and a moment later, they arrived. Hyper attended his funeral and is forced to go back to the adoption center not long after. But this time, he didn't stay there for long. Another hedgehog adopted him and his name is known as Lighter. For some strange reason, he didn't really give himself a last name. Hyper could sense something strange from Lighter though. Hyper then recognized the strange energy. It came from the yellow orb four years ago. Lighter has yellow fur and he is wearing gold robe that has a hood attached to it and it goes from his chest to all way to his feet, covering most of his body. He is wearing wooden sandles with white gloves. Hyper felt like he went with him, all that happened during his life will finally be solved. He agreed to go with Lighter and both of them went to the floating city of Skyler where Lighter lives. Hyper is shocked that Lighter lives in the floating city of Skyler. He could now visit his best friend, Skylark, everyday. Like his other father, Lighter lived in a mansion but it looks like a japense mansion you can find on Earth. It has a weird roof like those rooves in Japan but the colors are cyan and gold, the city's main colors. He settled in the house and went to Lighter, to find more about him. He eventually found him outside in a grassless spot in the backyard. Grass covers the yard except a rectangular spot in the grass has nothing in it. Lighter is at the other side of the rectangle while Hyper is at the other. "The darkness is coming, young Zack Light and you already seen one of the strongest people that can use darkness. He killed your father. Darkinga," said Lighter in a old man voice. Hyper guessed he was in his sixties but right now, he didn't really care. Darkinga then flashed back into Hyper's mind. If you want to kill me someday, I suggest you use your light energy usefully, the words repeated over and over again in Hyper's mind. Hyper doesn't know who Lighter is but if he wants to kill Darkinga, he is going to need help from Lighter. Lighter senses his revenge. "I sense your hatred of Darkinga and you wish to kill him one day. You see, it won't be that easy. He is known as the dark lord and is one of the strongest darkness users out there. I'll train you to hopefully help you use your light energy to defeat him but before I do that, you must promise me you won't let Darkinga affect your life. Don't let him change you or how you act. Do you agree, Hyler?" Lighter asked Hyper. Hyper nodded and Lighter smiled,"now, point two fingers at me and try to fire a lightning bolt." Hyper had absolutely no clue what do to fire a lightning bolt. How will that make a lightning bolt come out of two fingers? But he could feel electricity in his body. He went ahead and tried the move anyway. He pointed two fingers at him and suddenly, a yellow bolt of lightning came out and is fired straight at Lighter. Hyper smiled at the move but then wondered what did Lighter do since the lightning bolt came straight at him. Lighter didn't move instead he just stood there and the lightning bolt took a direct hit. He somehow absorbed the attack. "Very good. I had a hard time absorbing that attack. But we still have much more training to go through before you are ready to take on the darkness," said Lighter, talking normally despite getting hit by a lightning bolt. After that, Hyper went through four more years of training with Lighter and he had barely any rest. He finally mastered his powers but during the years, he accidentally make electrical objects explode and once caused the city's power to go out for a week. He learned a bunch of new powers. He now could turn his own body into electricity and control objects. He could go inside video games and prevent him from getting a game over inside the game. He could also travel in electric lines or objects. If he goes inside the internet, he could go to the other side of the world in a few seconds thanks to his powers. He could recharge electrical objects and can fire lightning bolts out of his fingers much more easily. His more interesting moves are is that he can make a force field of lightning that blocks attacks and can shock who ever it touches. Hyper could also make his fur glow to a brighter yellow and he can fly on a solid cloud that he made during the years. Hyper also has a ground and a air move that uses his lightning powers. He can sent large amounts of lightning under the ground and follows its enemy until it gets its victim. His air move is a tornado filled with lightning. He can make it huge enough to destroy an entire town or small tornado about the size of a regular sized adult. But his strongest move is when he creates a giant ball of yellow light. It does devastating damage and usually kills its victim. If a person tries to attack it, the ball divides itself into twelve arrows of lights and homes in on its target. The attack never misses and the only way you can be safe from the attack, you have to prevent Hyper from using it. A side effect from the attacks is that he can paralyze people with his powers. At age 13, Hyper began competing in tournaments and loves to compete in them. He usually compete in the Skylark Cup in the town of Skyler and him and his friend, Skylark, usually compete in the tournament. His father named the Skylark Cup after him. Hyper and Skylark sometimes battle each other. But in the fall in Skylark, Hyper met his ultimate enemy. Kaburaisu the Sky Blue Dragon. This was also Hyper's first adventure. It was when Hyper decided to follow a dragon that has reportedly been seen flying over Skyler. He followed Kaburaisu to his old secret hangout and discovered he is going to blow up the city. Hyper challenged him to a battle but he was one of the strongest opponents he ever fought. His scaly skin is cyan and he has yellow horns going out of his back and it starts at his forehead and it goes down his back between his giant wings. He wears yellow gloves and gold colored shoes. He has a long scaly tail. Kaburaisu's powers are also strong. His horns absorb electricity and he can sent them back at his opponent. His breath can freeze people or objects and he can make fire easily which seems to be his common move that he uses. His scales are bullet proof and Hyper thought he is pretty much unstoppable. He challenged him to a battle and the only attack that worked on him is his strongest, the orb of light. He used it but due to his bullet proof scales, it didn't finish him off or kill him. But it did force him to retreat and he never used his plan after that. At age 15, Hyper encountered Darkinga again but it is more like that Darkinga encountered him. It all started when Hyper tried to recharge himself from a thunder cloud but inside, he discovered Darkinga's hidden castle. Hyper decided to go inside to explore the castle and while traveling inside, he gasped when he saw Darkinga. He is a few years older and he looks different but Hyper recognized the darkness coming from him that he sensed six years ago. He turned himself into electricity and watched the scene in the light bulb that is attached to the ceiling. He watched and listened. He wasn't the only one in the room. Soldiers in black and purple armor are lined up in rows in front of Darkinga. "Now, it's time to put my plan into action. After all of these years, I finally found out where the cities of the Five Gods are located. If we attack the cities, the god that owns it will come and try to protect it and with my new powers, I'll capture the god and take her godly powers. We'll start with Skyla which her city is Skyland. Then Volcannon which is Volcanic. Then Watra with his city Aquada. After that, Treela with her city, Foressta. Then Lightra in her city, Electra. So, everybody knows the plan?" Darkinga asked. Everybody nodded. "Good then move out!" Darkinga shouted, leaving the room with his soldiers behind him. Hyper followed them to Skyland and while there, Hyper met Newton the Panda and with a few other friends, they prevented Darkinga's army taking over. After that, the plan failed. After the third city was saved, the gods get what Darkinga was doing and obviously he couldn't defeat all five of them considering they are gods. He lost but managed to escape the god's wrath. Hyper fought Darkinga during the years and he and Newton had to stop him a couple of times. But Hyper then met another of his friend which is also a rival, Zeonark Naro the hedgehog. It was when Hyper tried to stop Kaburaisu from getting the Sword of the Gods. It turned out Zeonark is also a lightning user and both of them worked well and they both stopped Kaburaisu from getting the sword. At age 16, Lighter gave Hyper his most prized possession. The Thunder Sword. It was when they were both training and Lighter then approached Hyper. He threw him the sword and said he could have it. The handle is a gold and black color and there is no blade when Hyper examined it. But he noticed a yellow button in the handle. He pressed it and suddenly a blade popped out. It's yellow and it is shaped like a lightning bolt. It flashes a bit and it can sent a thousands of volts who ever it touches. Lighter died due to his old age and Hyper was saddened but he is now old enough to not go back to the adoption center. But a few months after Lighter's death, Hyper met the strongest dark user he ever encountered, even more powerful then Darkinga's. Hyper met him when dark users declared war on the planet and the leader of the dark army is known as Azuron. His dark energy is off the charts and Azuron reborn Hyper's enemies, made them stronger, and gathered a group all of Hyper's enemies, including Darkinga. The group was especially made to take care of Hyper. But thanks to all of Hyper's friends, they defeated the dark attacking the planet and Azuron's army began to fall. Hyper battled Azuron but he never managed to defeat him or even serverely injure him. He told Hyper he would come back someday and he retreated. Hyper's enemies however are still out there and alive. Hyper will never forget about Azuron, the only person he knows that's stronger then Darkinga. Hyper swore he would also kill him someday. But few months later, he encountered Azuron again without any of his soldiers or guards. Hyper is on his guard but Azuron didn't hurt him at all. Instead, he pointed a finger at Hyper and a ball of black energy came racing at Hyper. Hyper jumped to avoid it but it ended up turning around and it hit Hyper in the air, somehow going inside of him. Hyper fell painfully on the ground with a purple dark aura surrounding him and suddenly, his clothes and fur began to change into a black and purple color. Hyper asked Azuron what is this. "This is a gift, child. You see, I put the Darkness inside of you and no matter how strong the light is, you can't get the Darkness out. Instead, use it and increase the dark energy inside of you. Someday you will thank me for you're new power and join me. For now, farewell with your new power," he answered Hyper. A black fog suddenly surrounded him and he left. Hyper suddenly turned back to normal and he tried a couple times to get the darkness out of him but failed. Hyper has to live with the darkness inside of him for the rest of his life. Hyper tries to avoid using it as much as he can but sometimes, he is forced to use it and it slowly increased his dark energy. Hyper knows if he uses it too much, the dark energy could take over Hyper and the light energy will slowly die inside him. The dark energy will then take over Hyper's body and it will cause him to join the dark. Hyper only used the Dark Form three times ever since he got this but as long as he uses his light energy, his light energy will be stronger and will stop the darkness from taking over. He is still worried about Azuron's "gift" and tries everyday to remove it but fails. One day, Hyper discovered a move that not even Lighter knew before his death. Hyper discovered his Super Form. It started after he gained large amounts of electricity and Hyper suddenly felt the electricity powering up his body. Hyper then glowed and a blinding white light then surrounded the area. The white light then cleared and Hyper discovered his clothes are all a gold color and his fur is flashing to bright colors, one different color after another. His Dark Form is stronger then his Super Form but his Super Form lasts much longer and it increases his light energy. It powers up every one of Hyper's moves into a stronger attack and Hyper uses it to defeat his strongest enemies. However, it needs large amounts of electricity and after a while, he turns back to normal but it lasts longer then his Dark Form which only lets Hyper use his Dark Form for about a few minutes. However, it drains Hyper's electricity and energy and leaves him highly vulnerable to attacks. Hyper still loves this attack but is unsure if he can defeat Azuron or Darkinga next time he encounters them with this. But Hyper realized something even more important. The darkness is slowly gaining power and if it continues, the balance between the light and dark will be uneven and war will break out. Hyper's goal is to restore the balance between the light and dark. Months after this event, Hyper battled Darkinga in front of a magical gate that is in space and it lets you enter the world where angels and gods and goddesses live. The gate is known as the Lumina Gate. It was a tough fight and both fighters have barely any strength left. Hyper used the last of his strength to finish off Darkinga and he got hit by the arrows and died. Six years after the event, Hyper met Blackova and they went on an adventure with Newton and Zeonark. Blackova told them that his father, Shadikku, is trying to reborn Darkinga. They all then went on a quest together to stop them. However, Hyper got captured by Kaburaisu and Blackova, Newton, and Zeonark are forced to give him a shard of the Morning Star, with three shards, it can allow you to go to the Lumina Gate. Kaburaisu managed to retrieve all three and he captured the group and they are forced to go to the Lumina Gate with them. He managed to reborn Darkinga by using the one of the two sacred artifacts with one of them known as the Mythic Halo. However, Darkinga killed Shadikku and used the artifacts to go back in time and everybody with Shadikku's dead body found themselves six years ago, exactly where Hyper and Darkinga battled at. Darkinga tried to escape and go back to Mobious for some strange reason by taking the Lumina Bridge, a bridge that leads to a portal that takes you to Mobious. But Hyper and Blackova followed him, leaving behind the others with Kaburaisu. They all battled each other but as a last effort, Darkinga destroyed the bridge. Hyper and Blackova fell off and drifted into space, knowing that they will exit the force field that has a fresh supply of air in it. But they did. Hyper and Blackova exited the force field but Blackova used the last of his powers to surround them with a force field. But he couldn't control where they go. They drifted into space and landed on a foreign planet where they met a hedgehog named Mercury. Mercury's attitude is a bit bratty and he is known to cuss at a lot of people. In order to get back to Earth where Newton and Zeonark are and not to mention Darkinga and Kaburaisu, they have to shoot themselves to Earth by using a cannon known as the Starshooter. But Hyper discovered that Azuron used to live here and Mercury told him that if you want to defeat Azuron, he has to voyage through the Temple of Skills and pass the eight tests alone. Hyper chose not to leave the planet and he did and he got himself the strongest form of all, the Light Form. It can last longer and is more powerful then any forms. With this, he can defeat Azuron. After accomplishing the tests, Hyper returned to find the planet in chaos. Purple like steam began shooting out of the ground and Mercury told them that Azuron discovered Hyper's location and now he sent a virus through the planet. The virus will blow up the planet and Hyper and Blackova has to get to the Starshooter before it's too late. They managed to get there but Kilik, Mercury's stepfather, demanded Mercury should go. Mercury is heartbroken, knowing his family will die but he had no choice. Mercury went with them and the trio are surrounded in milky white spheres which help them breath when fired from the Starshooter. They all raced to Mobious but found the planet in darkness. Even worst, Newton and Zeonark are captured and Hyper is tricked into a trap that Azuron made. He is captured. Now only Blackova and Mercury can save the world now, to hopefully prevent it from ending up like Mercury's planet. Blackova and Mercury managed to save Newton and Zeonark and all of them helped save Hyper. Then they battled Darkinga and Azuron but even with all of them fighting at once, it still wasn't enough. Hyper used his Light Form, the form he got from the temple on Mercury's planet. Using this, Hyper defeated both of them but they managed to get away but the world went back to normal and soon became peaceful to them. Since Mercury's family is all dead and his planet is blown up, Mercury is forced to stay on Mobious. Hyper volunteered and Mercury now lives in his mansion with Hyper. They both are like brothers and usually have parties every weekend. Mercury tries not to remind himself of what happened but he hopes nothing like this will ever happen again. If you want to find out more about these events and details, check out the Blackova trilogy and the Mercury's Story series, two fan fictions. His personality is very emotional and despite his dreadful history, nothing changed him and he still kept his promise to Lighter. When he was once drunk, he accidentally destroyed a city and Hyper had to pay for all the damage obviously. He can be very emotional like a five year old sometimes. He always act nice towards his friends and family which was only Lighter. He sometimes acts competitive when he fights his rivals or when he fights. Referees often are forced to pull him away from his opponets in tournaments. When he sees his enemies wraking havoc or starting a fight with Hyper, he is annoyed. He forgives people that he accidently did something to them nicely without a problem and he doesn't really know how to feel about the strangers in the city, considering he doesn't know them. At school, he can make friends easily and due to him being known in Skyler because of his powers, he is very popular in school. After Lighter's death, the mansion he owns is now Hyper's. The money Lighter owned is now Hyper's. Hyper hates going on adventures to save the world from darkness but he is forced to anyway. He never really gets a break. He saved the world who knows how many times but that's life for Hyper. Always going on adventures to save the world from darkness.



Haro	Jun 15 2008, 02:38 PM Post #2
"Hmph."-In slow motion Posts: 1,774 Group: S Rank Hero Member #7,401 Joined: April 13, 2008	Wall of text xD. I read it until I hit the WoT, and it looked good.



Lord Bowie	Jun 15 2008, 03:45 PM Post #3
What is the difference between a duck? Posts: 4,799 Group: Former Monarchs Member #7,312 Joined: April 10, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Allbowdown Xbox Live Gamertag: allbowdown	READING.. MAKES... EYES... BLLLEEEDDD!!! From what I saw he looks well thought out but maybe a tad on the strong side. But upon inspection of his weaknesses I have the perfect character to "fossilize" him with.
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KAPPY	Jun 15 2008, 03:48 PM Post #4
Carnival Night Act 1 Posts: 175 Group: E Rank Guardian Member #9,066 Joined: June 14, 2008	That sure makes me feel better, Bowie XP Oh and guys, much more details about Hyper's history are posted on fan fictions on other forums. I'll eventually post some here. Edited by KAPPY, Jun 15 2008, 03:49 PM.



Lord Bowie	Jun 15 2008, 03:55 PM Post #5
What is the difference between a duck? Posts: 4,799 Group: Former Monarchs Member #7,312 Joined: April 10, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Allbowdown Xbox Live Gamertag: allbowdown	Well you have definately had a lot of time to develop the character. One of the more impressive bios I've seen. I know I could have said that.. one post ago. But I'm not that practical.
	Saff Profile // Kam Profile // Sadistic Profile Stop by my art thread ----------------------------------------------- SUPER DA PAGE WARNING: Above Post May Contain Sarcastic/Harsh/Stupid/Offensive/Idiotic/Blasphemous Content. Deal With It. ______________ What's the difference between a champion and a challenger.. a challenger is trying to become, a champion became.


Royal Conquest	Jun 15 2008, 04:03 PM Post #6
CANADIAN EH Posts: 6,543 Group: B Rank Legend Member #1,702 Joined: July 16, 2007	Wow. He's... Described.
	My new RP! =D Come on and join up it's been so long!


Snowmanic	Jun 18 2008, 10:19 AM Post #7
it is way too cold for this Posts: 1,504 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,022 Joined: May 29, 2008 Gender: Female	He's a bit overpowered, don't you think? Electric Tornado. An attack that can... Wipe out an entire city, should he choose to do so. Thunderquake. Nice name. It'll destroy everything in its path, and can only be avoided by flying opponents. Electrical Copies. I have no issues with this move in terms of power, but it's kinda... Naruto-ish, no? Except Naruto probably had some cheap hand sign things. Orb of Light. It kills anyone, should they try to hit it. Beam of the Light Goddess. It even has a godmod-like name. Instakill, never been stopped, big enough to engulf a giant... Dark, Light, and Super Hyper. The old godmod super forms, now in different colors! And one's seizurific! Not to mention... He apparently destroyed a city when he was drunk once. xP "BUT WAIT, when he uses xxxxx, he's left vulnerable!" His opponents will be DEAD, so does it matter? "Another person might come!" The chances of that being an evil character... In the Sonicverse... Is kinda low. Even if it was a villain, he's got some lightning sword AND he's a fast runner. Okay, he's also a bit of a gary-stu. He's a hero. Saves the world from darkness. Struck with lightning, gains electric powers. He saw his adopted father dead in a pool of blood. He had hugearse amount of "light" energy at the age of flippin' NINE. Most of that stuff is gary-stu all over. SAVE TEH WORLD FROM DARKNESS. LIET R GUD, CUZ DARK B BAD. DARK R ALWAIZ BAD, CUZ LIET R AWSUM. Oh yeah. That thing about being struck by lightning all the colors of the rainbow? I laughed so hard at that, and I told it to my sister. I quote: "He was struck by a gay god!" My favorite sentence... "A wealthy and rich hedgehog named Kaiyo Haikomo came and agreed to adopt Zack." Wealthy AND rich? Wow. How'd ya swing that? STOP. Grammar time. -dances- In your writing, keep the tense constant. It happened in the past, therfore past tense is needed. You occasionally used present tense. Parallel sentence structure. "Lighter has yellow fur and he is wearing gold robe..." No. "Lighter had yellow fur and he wore a gold robe..." Everyday is used in phrases like "everyday chores." Every day is used in phrases like "chores are done every day." I don't hate EVERYTHING about Hyper. From his description, he looks neat (though the Shadow-style quills are getting old), and his personality's pretty well thought out. There are other things, but I don't feel like typing them right now. P: I apologize for any offense taken for anything in this post. I call it constructive criticism. Or just criticism, or critique. It's all the same to me.
	~dA~tumblr~


KAPPY	Jun 27 2008, 05:15 PM Post #8
Carnival Night Act 1 Posts: 175 Group: E Rank Guardian Member #9,066 Joined: June 14, 2008	Oh.... shut the hell up. I know some things are overpowered but I'm working on it. That was a bit harsh, wasn't it? D:



RedQueenAi	Jun 27 2008, 06:43 PM Post #9
Character Select Posts: 13 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #9,102 Joined: June 27, 2008	My... this is A LOT of reading~ He's a good character... you could make a 3-issue comic of his origins~ [/Back Archie Joke] But I Will have to agree with Kiara, power him down... Not everyone has the power at his age to destroy things (except for tails... that runt can make giant robots if he wanted to...) And just remember, just because your (adoptive) parents are wealthy... doesn't mean they can give you squat. ...They could give you a nice Boot to the head In their will~
	I LOVE to roleplay~! Drop me a line...! ...If it's even remotely interesting and around for at least a month or two.. I MIGHT be interested in drawing your character~! ...But if you ditch me... I'll draw an ugly mustache on it... And before I forget... No... I'm NOT a furry... I just love to draw them :B


Haro	Jun 27 2008, 06:58 PM Post #10
"Hmph."-In slow motion Posts: 1,774 Group: S Rank Hero Member #7,401 Joined: April 13, 2008	Well, Kiara was actually perfectly correct lol. He is a good character like I said before, but after I read more, he is godmodded. I mean, Quote: "Beam of the Light Goddess-Hyper's strongest attack and it can only be used when Hyper is in his Light Form. When used, Hyper charges up a beam and when it's fully charged, Hyper unleashes it at his opponent and it's GIGANTIC! It can engulf a giant very easily. This attack usually kills his opponent and was never stopped before. However, this uses ALL of Hyper's light energy and puts him back into his normal form. The beam is very destructive and powerful and can instantly kill a person and not to mention they have no chance of surviving if the attack hits him." Quote: s attack usually kills his opponent and was never stopped before. However, this uses ALL of Hyper's light energy and puts him back into his normal form. The beam is very destructive and powerful and can instantly kill a person and not to mention they have no chance of surviving if the attack hits him. Quote: The beam is very destructive and powerful and can instantly kill a person and not to mention they have no chance of surviving if the attack hits him. Plus Quote: and it's GIGANTIC! It can engulf a giant very easily. = Godmodded. Period. And how can he have a dark form if he is a light character that destroys all darkness? Plus. Regular can just Orb the opponent. If they dodge it, he goes into Dark Form and godmods suddenly having dark energy. If he doesn't godmod them to death then, he goes into light form, uses his "Speed of Lightning" + his "Gigantic attack that is able to kill his opponent and cannot be dodged unless you are Sonic". Pretty much. You're a dead man if you RP against your character. I can point out WAY more stuff but that'd seem mean. He is a good character at his base, and you should make him less godmodded. Edited by Haro, Jun 27 2008, 07:03 PM.



Kitm	Jun 27 2008, 10:54 PM Post #11
Lava Reef Act 1 Posts: 2,977 Group: =SB= Governors Member #1,073 Joined: May 18, 2007 Gender: Male Country: Canada Game Currently Playing: Destiny	Quote: IQ: 98 I don't think you considered THAT as a weakness? Also: Quote: Thunderquake- Hyper digs into the ground with his hands and can unleash large amounts of electricity through the ground. It homes in on its enemies and destroys anything in its path. The only way to make it stop is by attacking its target. Hyper uses this move to defeat his enemies underground. Thats a bit of a contradiction considering the following: Quote: Weaknesses: Dirt being on him, getting buried alive, and earth/ground powers Might want to rework that kink there. More inconveniento problemo: Quote: Beam of the Light Goddess-Hyper's strongest attack and it can only be used when Hyper is in his Light Form. When used, Hyper charges up a beam and when it's fully charged, Hyper unleashes it at his opponent and it's GIGANTIC! It can engulf a giant very easily. As stated before, this is considered a god-mod. Quote: This attack usually kills his opponent and was never stopped before. However, this uses ALL of Hyper's light energy and puts him back into his normal form. It merely puts him back to normal? No period of weakness? Quote: The beam is very destructive and powerful and can instantly kill a person, and not to mention they have no chance of surviving if the attack hits him. The second bit of that seemed a little unnecessary, but okay. Quote: It all started when Hyper tried to recharge himself from a thunder cloud but inside, he discovered Darkinga's hidden castle. Hyper decided to go inside to explore the castle and while traveling inside, he gasped when he saw Darkinga. Quick question. Was Hyper not expecting the owner of the castle to be home, or was he astounded that he saw him again? In my opinion, you should turn this character into a pork chop; trim the excess fat and leave only the meat.



KAPPY	Jun 28 2008, 03:10 AM Post #12
Carnival Night Act 1 Posts: 175 Group: E Rank Guardian Member #9,066 Joined: June 14, 2008	Yeah. I'm working on it guys. I don't need two other people basically repeating what Kiara said. Thanks for helping though.



Haro	Jun 28 2008, 12:28 PM Post #13
"Hmph."-In slow motion Posts: 1,774 Group: S Rank Hero Member #7,401 Joined: April 13, 2008	Sorry for sounding mean btw.



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