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Topic Started: Apr 16 2007, 08:41 PM (196 Views)
demonaero Apr 16 2007, 08:41 PM Post #1
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Carnival Night Act 2
 This was a unusual idea I though up just yesderday, took some few rewrittings.

I'll brief the plot here:

Aero, a character afar from official; glances at his true purpose. Venturing in a famous world, his jounery prove success, however he may put his powers to the test. Even if it's risk involve trying to befriend a official.

This is however nothing to do with the plot of the actual Aero, this is a inspiration of going on Soah, and other forums that pretty much did everything with their character. Mine lived threw the hard times, so this gives a good explainable.

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Somewhat bewilder, an bestial looking figure. Grotesque in size, much larger then a average human, it's mass would make a body builder die from overdose. However, numerous scratches and bruises blemish the skin visibly. Dried blood drench over some newly yet recent wounds, none around the torso, or the rest but in the face.

There was a distention notably on the right of the cheek, inflamed, pressing the eyelid till the orb, or eye is shield; this bugged the host somewhat occasionally drawing his hand to rub the swelling, it meaninglessly did nothing.

Identical walls of the alley narrowed a long stretch, almost endless beyond limit. Structures seem impoverish. Indicating these paths haven't been explored in some time.

Evading the piling scrap bags that laid in courses across the walling areas, hopping to avoid ruining a fabricated trench, which in having already been damage by tears.

Stopping, suddenly craning his head back. As if he was a little gingered about being watch. Nasal passages widen, observing the different smell in its sensory glands. Despite the garbage stank the most, there was another. But further.

Lips press as if wanting to speak, he held his breathe. Snorting; leaving a trail of foot prints feeling the close is clear. Then licking his lips, feeling the dry skin chap. Flicking the long gated flesh back into his maw.

The voices of humans were never too far, his journey would be short. Scaling the passage seeing humans cluster the never so lovely -Station Square-

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This is the first chapter, how is it?

((actually I though comicing this version.))
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Lord DragonFlame Apr 17 2007, 12:04 PM Post #2
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Next chapter please.
I will be waiting.
Good written and good story.
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Boota Apr 19 2007, 03:30 AM Post #3
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STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL!
 Nice! Very very good... I'm waiting for the next chapter!
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