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| Spikes The Phantom | Jan 28 2007, 10:28 AM Post #1 |
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heres my second fan fic story hehe i have lots of these but i post em barely because my imagination is so wild that if i post all of my stories i would have raised the post count by 1000 here is the key to signalcharacters speaking selean=purple spikes=orange wires=green UNIGHT=red soilders=blue but yea here the UNHEROES: THE U.N.H.E.R.O.E.S 2 year after spikes arrival and his heroic acts the world had been in peace for a while no evil was in site spikes was out and about trying to find a good place to relax when a robbery had started the cops arrived but were captured and held as hostages reenforcements were no where close spikes jumped to action and stopped the robbery just by walking up to the robbers the cops were grateful but the chief of the group got green with envy so he went to the congress and pledged that a new law be made a law called the U.N.H.E.R which standed for Unofficial National Heroism Rule the law had been agreed with and approved the rule states that no act of heroism can be made without being an officialized the law was enforced by the U.N.H.E.R.O.E.S which standed for Unofficial National Heroism Rule Official Enforcing Service the next day is where our story unfolds...salean is seen flying with a hangglider along with spikes and wires WOOHOOO!!!!! salean why are u so happy? because this is one of the things on my list spikes flies by them throwing them off course SPIKES!!! wires flies towards a building spikes flies to save him but there hanggliders get tangled this is gonna hurt salean flies toward them then uses her heart whip to catch them WHEW!!! suddenly a group of guys in armour appear u are under a rest for breaking the rule of UNHER salean lifts them up on to a building the group fires at them the eam heads straight for them and...INTERMISSION BE BACK IN ABOUT 10 MINUTES |
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| Duckroll | Feb 2 2007, 12:46 PM Post #2 |
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Hmm... Well with the thing with fanfiction is that you have to write it like a story. Instead of just writing "woohoo!" in a different color, try writing it out like this. "WOOHOO!" Selean screamed at the top of his lungs. Or at the very least: Selean: WOOHOO! Just my two cents... |
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| Nirguris | Feb 3 2007, 05:02 PM Post #3 |
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Yeah, it sounds more like an RP when you just change the colors. But hey, it sounds like a good fic at least. P.S. Salean is a girl.
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| Duckroll | Feb 4 2007, 04:04 PM Post #4 |
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A girl? ARG! CURSE YOU SPEED READING! |
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| Spikes The Phantom | Feb 5 2007, 07:54 PM Post #5 |
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yea sorry i was gone for a long while im busy |
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